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for The Demon Child Amaya

by EvilAnge1

person natasha
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow loved this story so mush. ican't wait for more to come.
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh I soooo love this damn story you have got to finish this please keep up with this great story line I want everyone happy with an epiology too at the end....... maybe kouga and kagura yah know together kanna happy lord know the child needs to learn how to smile..... and I hope inus daughter gets with her brother.......so I will wait with baited breath so come on more chappies please lol..
person nchsmi
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT!!!!! Amaya and Rin are just so cute together! Amaya's swimming lessons was much better than mine. My grandfather just throw me in a river, and yelled 'Now, get your blk ass back here on your own!' Ain't that some shit? LOL! I can't wait to read what Amaya's decision will be. I hope that she brings the gang, forward to her time. It might be interesting to see Sesshomaru get jealous of his older self if he 'accidently' touches the younger InuYasha! ^_~

Great chapter, till the next one...

B reading U!
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far I really like this story. Out of curiosity, are you reposting this? I think I've read some of this fic a few weeks back. The only concern I have is that chapter 8 is not posted. Instead, chapter 7 is posted twice and then it skips to chapter 9 afterward. I would really like reading chapter 8. It would be awesome if you could fix that little problem. Thank you.
person KIKI441
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thank goodness you got your story back up. i was
beginning to get anxious there for a minute. anyway
i think that she should killed yura first. then you
could let her still stay an adult until after they
return to the future and killed kenshi. i think
that's what he was called. sorry if the name is
wrong but once i saw the new update i just
had to read it.

one thing i need to know. if it kenshi that
killed her beloved brothers. would killing yura
bring back everyone that was killed? i was thinking
why not let amaya use her powers to take them back
to a time before her brothers and the others were
killed. that way when amaya returns to her right
time her brothers and everyone who were killed will
be there waiting for her. imagine what her brother, the
one that she is in love with, i've forgotten his name.
anyway, it would be funny to see his expression once he
gets a good look at what his sister will look like once
she is older. anyway, it's just something to think about.
as i said she should go ahead and kill yura while she is
there. like the saying, better safe than sorry.

update soon.
person jdbbrz27
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I started reading and wasn't able to stop and I can't wait to read more it is a fascinating story and I can't wait to see how it ends thank you for writing it and I hope you update it to the finish cause I can't wait to see how it comes out.
person nchsmi
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that you've got this back up! I can't wait 4 chapter 27 to come up. I love this story!

B reading U!
person nchsmi
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness! Now maybe I'll finally find out what happens next when you get to the higher chapters! I've missed this story! Smooches!

B reading U!
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i have been waiting for an update for so long....glad to see your back but please i really need chapter 27...because i left off on 26 so please update more....love the story by the way
person kmoaton
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering where this story was! It's good to see it here!!