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for The Demon Child Amaya

by EvilAnge1

schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully mommy and daddy will be able to help out their little princess.
schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
If she revives them, then she will have more allies. The only problem with reviving them right away is that they might just die all over again right in front of her. Is it even possible to have both sets of parents alive at the same time?
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i want more please finish and send me a notice.
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More more more damn you more lol keep up the great work lol.....can't wait till you update.
person nchsmi
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So srry about your broken engagement. But, the chapter was awesome!
B reading U!
person nchsmi
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! Nice chapter, it was well worth the wait! So, Kouga and Kagura, huh? That's different! Especially, since she's the one that killed most of his warriors. That he is able to look past that, and see her as a possible 'mate', is a BIG step for him! He's just as immature as InuYasha when you think of it.

And, now we come to the moment of truth. Sesshomaru and Amaya have a duel! I wonder if Sesshomaru will win? If he does, will this be when they will all get to go into the well, and see the future that is instore for them? Or will Amaya be the victor? I hope Sesshomaru wins, and they get to go. It would be sick to have the Inu brother met their future selves! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

B reading U!
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNoooooo more more I just got a nibble of this great story please more chappies please........................................wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I need more. Oh by the by I love the hint of kouga and kagura love itttttt......but more chappies please.
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story alot, a few.. amusing spelling mistakes though can confuse people though.. I did have a good laugh at this one.

"Yeah, and she told me that she is in love with him. He saved her life at birth, she was born with under developed lunch and she was extremely tiny for a pup but apparently he has the power to heal and healed her."

Where instead of lungs its lunch xD it made me hungry too :x

I say Amaya should stay in the past and kill the witch now. that is just my opinion.

Though you should go through and re-read your fic to fix those.. funny typos please hurry and update soon I cannot wait to see what you chose for her to do. ^-^

Thanks for writing an awesome Fanfic
Demonskid DK
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finish the damn story please I'm like when when when are we going to meet the other kids and what will happen to kagura and kanna maybe she could end up with kouga and have kids too maybe shippo and rin will get together lol sigh........ please with peanut butter on top finish this story
person nchsmi
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What has happened to you? Do you have writer's block, or have you fallen and can't get up? LOL...

But, seriously, where is chapter 28? I'm dying to read it! B reading U (soon)!