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for The Demon Child Amaya

by EvilAnge1

schedule March 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a great story I hope you update soon.
schedule February 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hi i know im new as a member but i fallowed this story before i became one and it is one of my favorites. it keeps me on the edge of my seat the whole time so if you can update soon that be great. the only issue i have is that the updates have been far and few in between for a while now. thanks a good luck ill be waiting
schedule February 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm soooo happy that you are back to writing this story is so great I love it Shesshy and Inu love them can't wait till you update this kickin story......
person nchsmi
schedule November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH
MY
GOOOODDDNNNNEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks so much for finally updating this! It's one of my favorite stories of all time, and I was so curious about the on coming fight! Man, you can clearly see both InuYasha AND Sesshomaru's personalities in Amaya in this chapter more than the others. She has Sesshomaru's cool manner and intellect, but InuYasha's bold, brashness and wild fire! She's quite the combo! This was awesome! On a scale of 1-10 this was a 20!

B reading U!
person Alexandria
schedule April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story and i wish you would continue because i would love to know what happens to Amaya. Now that Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha are in the future what happens to them? and do they help their little princess?
person SP777
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #31...

Well, I think you can hold off on reviving the future
Inu brothers and wait until Amaya defeats Kenchi..with
back-handed help from her past parents of course. You
know they won't be able to stand back and let their
daughter fight alone. :-)
schedule July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
not sure. but want to se the fight, but don't know how iun and sess will fit in.
schedule June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think you should let them stay dead for little bit more cause there would be so many more people to worry about their future and their pass self. I agree they should meet but not yet if there is a problem that only the futures (inu and shesshy) can fix then yeah but right now amaya is worrying about her own unborn life and her past parents give the child a break, Or just send the past's back home as soon as you can or mix it and bring one of the pasts and the futures self back to where everyone in the past is waiting. I'm just saying you have alot to work with........I don't know if I helped or confused but I'll be waiting for your new update though.
person SP777
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #30...

Now, that's a BIG iffy question...But in this case it would
be beneficial, because the past Inuyasha & Sesshomaru can't
really interfere in anything or they'll disrupt the timeline.
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A very good story so far:).
I think it cud be intresting so se the old Sesshomaru and Inuyash interact whit there younger counterparts. Befor they have the big batle.
Cep up the good work;)
Darksadow