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Great start. I love the wording and the story if how youki came to be. Its new and refreshing. Keep it up and can't wait for the mnext chapeter.

Nice! Beautiful start, I look forward to your next chapters^.~

This is really good. I am excited to see where this story goes and how you will make this story out in the end. I wonder if your Dai, is Inutaisho, or perhaps another taiyoaki general that was like Inutaisho. Did you make up the story of the yoaki coming into existance or did you do some research of japanese folklore. I would really like to read that legend, if it does indeed exist. 5 stars to you and i will stayed tuned.