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December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Character development! Complicated motivations! Shocking revelations!
I'm very eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
-CG
I'm very eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
-CG
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December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story so far has broken my heart. Inu's final moments, Sess's emotional constipation and inability to mourn or even answer for what he'd done - all of it made these five chapters too sad. Now the basic concept given in the first chapters was completely wonderful. I wonder where you're going to go with this. Even though you comment that this is a Sess/kagome piece, I do hope that somehow, Inuyasha is given some spot of happiness either in this life or the next. Please say he does...
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November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful. I love the way this latest chapter showed the frustration that Sesshoumaru was feeling. Also the depression coming fro
Inuyasha that he did not understand. You leave some awesome cliffies. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Inuyasha that he did not understand. You leave some awesome cliffies. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
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November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent so far but you´re spelling the swords wrong. It´s Tensaiga, Tessaiga or Tetsusaiga. I love your portrayal of Sesshoumaru and his story from the beginning and why he is like he is. It fits really good even why he did not have a problem whith leaving Rin behind in a human village. I´m really curious how you will bring him and Kagome together, I can´t see it at the moment.
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nicely done. i bet i can guess why it didnt work. Inuyasha lost his will to live so Tensega could not recall the soul.
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November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot. It's definitely one of the better written stories I've encountered on here in a while. Sesshomaru seems very...in character, I guess. It's nice change from him as a sex maniac. I really hope you continue.
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
In case I did not tell you, this story is amazing so far. I did not notice any issues with grammar or spelling. The story so far is not one I have come across. I like thAt I have not come across any other similar stories. I can hardly wait until the next chapter is posted. Truly a wonderful start to a great story.
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November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful opening chapters and background information!
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November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice sienna this one is going 2 b rly good i can tell alrdy. gj sienna as always.
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, such a different take on the story. I like it and i think you should update more!