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I love this story! I started reading it and couldn't stop.

Wow. Pretty amazed by all the twists and turns to the story. Good job!

yup. ty for the update. anyway, baka Kags. Still, it's not all her fault. Who would have thought Seshy would know about mouth to mouth. I wonder how long it will take him to figure out that he's attracted to her.

I've seen this a few times & today was the day I decided to read it. I have had it written down to check out for awhile.I get nervous when I start to read a story on this site because it seems more often then not when I do start to read a story here,I'd say 8 out of 10 times the writer seems to just abandon the story completely or if they do update them,it's few & far between. There is nothing wrong with writers taking their time,as you can't rush creativity.The problem is that this site doesn't have a means for readers to be notified of updates.Now,I fell in love with your story & I'm going to have to keep checking to see if it's updated . I wanted to ask if this story is going to involve Sessh & Kagome,either,falling in love or at least, getting together in a romantic way? I really don't know what will happen but,I'm getting a bit melancholy. I don't like the idea that Kagome dies in the past & never gets to see her family again,so I'm hoping that Kagome becomes Immortal .I'm also a Sessh & Kagome fan.

excellent story hope to read more

I must say: your fic is one of the best developed I have ever the pleasure of reading! I hope you continue it (soon)! I find the characters very realistic (spot on!!) and the opening material about the coming of youkai was both fascinating and plausable. The pace is also good: the build-up is great ^_^ Please keep up the good work!! You have yourself a fan!! Please update as soon as possible!! Looking forward to more!!

Love it, Love it, Love it! I hope they get to Bokusenou soon. I can't wait to hear what he'll say to Sesshoumaru! Will he tell Kagome that Sesshoumaru killed Inuyasha? And why are so many demons being drawn to Kagome? Update again soon, please! :D

An interesting story so far. I like the fact that though Sesshomaru killed Inuyasha it was with wanting his half-brother at full strength and even more with having undercurrents of feelings the Western Lord does not want to acknowledge.

This whole 'gradual destruction of youkai' though has me terribly worried for the 'hero' youkai like Shippou & Kilala & Kouga. Especially Kilala as she is a lower level youkai. Or perhaps one of the reasons Totosai is not feeling the effects as closely as others is not only his elemental nature but his sometimes kindness with humans and in such a thought those that have been close */or helpful to Kagome and friends or other humans will be similarly benefited? It's a thought.
Though also a thought is if the Kami became so upset over an Accidental death an in fact Unwanted slaying to do as they have set in motion I seriously wonder why they couldn't have done so to 'protect their chosen race' while Naraku was alive and somehow save a whole bunch more of them. Sad as Sesshomaru killing Inuyasha was, he's not as detrimental to the lives of humans as Naraku was.

Thanks for writing!

Hot damn, that's some good reading! lol. Seriously, I was clinging to every word. I'm just lucky that I can review and say how awesome it is so far. But I really wish it wasn't stopped at that point because it's such a suspenseful and critical point! Really good, nonetheless. Oh, but there was one thing I noticed - you spelled fate as "fait" and... well yeah. If I recall that was actually just in the last chapter. That's it, so I'll be watching for updates. =)

ok done with the CH14 and your story is awesome, I specially liked how Sesh lost his mental footing lol. Keep it up!!!