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for Sesshoumaru Present

by cindygirl

person lara5170
schedule February 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I just had to reread it once again. I love your writing, all your stories are unique and wonderfully written. Thank you for another great one.
person lara5170
schedule May 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was a very good story but I've never read a story that you've written that hasn't been good. I enjoy your writing & I'm a huge Sessh/Kagome fan
person lara5170
schedule May 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why I've never read this story before, I'm just glad that I finally am. It's a very good story and it's very descriptive, I can picture in my mind what is being described. I've only read the 1st 11 or 12 chapters so far but I'm really looking forward to reading the rest. I was originally going to reread 'Her Destiny' but when I realized I hadn't read this story yet, I decided to read it instead.
person Anon
schedule February 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot.
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I may hate actual lemons, but fanfic lemons are the absolute best. Well worth the wait. Thanks! :)
schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Missed you and this story so much. But the lovin' between the two more then made up for the absence.
Loved it!
schedule December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Alright,*Pumps fist into the air* An update!! Thank you soooo much! I've been stalking this site for the last few days waiting for one, and was starting to get a little crazy around the eyes. I cannot wait for the citrusy goodness you promised!
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I decided to read up to what you had written until I left my review. To answer the question posted in the first chapter it really doesn't matter the length of the story, I will read it be it 1 chapter or 50. But I will admit, as much as I enjoyed your other story "Her Destiny," I have found this one, and it's shorter chapters much easier to digest. The pace is quick and yet it hasn't lost it's depth and it's becoming quite clear that you can accomplish just as much with a few chapters as you can with a lengthy story... maybe even a little bit more. This is truly the sign of an excellent writer.
I also want to praise you for your 'softer' Sesshomaru. I know many are against an OOC, but I prefer the much more approachable demon to the, well, stuck-up ass seen in most stories. Now a jerky Inuyasha, that I can handle (cause it makes me giggle to see Sesshomaru smack him down) and I hope they have another confrontation over Kagome. I'm also glad you chose to leave out Miroku, Shippo and Sango. While at times there presence is appreciated, it's not really necessary to the story, and would only bog it down... (yah for using Kirara though) Oh and double praise for no Kikyo... ugg...
I eagerly await more!
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting please update soon.
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading this story! I hope mthat you update sooner than last time, though. I hate waiting! Thanks!