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for Beautiful Stranger

by MomoDesu

person Nique
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow inu is so rude it so funny...its amazing how he can change mood just by food....hehehe typical greedy person....ha but the strange things about "haru" is he how he can walk around n ppl r ok wit him....mabe that can b his power or is he a calm version of sesshomaru...but wounldnt that throw inu off? i dont know i want to see what happens in the next chapter pease undate so i highly look foward to it
person ravenstears00
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new update! I am happy that you are continuing with this story. I really enjoy reading it! Please continue to update soon!
person Phoenix Wolf
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far!

I can't wait to read what you have planned next, and what Haru is going to tell them about what he remembers.

I look forward to your next installment.

Until we meet again.
person Hitsuki
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Waaaa!! I love it!! I'm rather curious as to how this will go^^ Can't wait for the next update!!
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh! I like this a lot! Thi is new, I am getting tired of the same story line over and over.Please, keep up the good work! Update soon!
person swasdiva
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, funtimes! Is this a Sess turns human story?? If so, his remarks about the other village make for a mysterious, intriguing backstory. With no memory and, well, becoming a new species, it'll be interesting to see his interactions with Kagome. Will his personality change? Will some hints of who he was remain? I'm very excited to read more!

That said, my only crit is that I felt the first chapter ended a little too abruptly. I'd think about maybe adding a bit to flesh it out or give it more closure or a smoother transition to chapter 2. JMO! I love the concept!