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November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
such a great story! I really hope you continue soon. It took me a while to get through it but I loved every moment. Every moment I had was spent reading this fic. It's so good and is really well written. Please update soon. I'm so curious about whats going on with Inuyasha during the new moon but I think maybe I have an idea but I won't say anything until you update. So please update.
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome story: well written, and great plot, I can't wait til the next chapter! Do you think that when you add to this that you could send me an email to let me know? my email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com (I REALLY wish this site had that feature like some others do)
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I just spent two days and a couple of wee hours in the morning reading this story. Like I was glued to my seat and only got up for the necessities (food, water, etc.). Lolz, I was just highly fascinated by the development of Inuyasha's dislike for Kagome at first (because let's face it, she really is an annoying bitch) to the interesting way you developed the Youkais (what with This Sesshoumaru and That Sesshoumaru) and the way you made Sesshy-Chan a hardcore uke.
Because let's face it, Sesshomaru takes it up the ass rough, and he likes it. =D
But seriously, I love how you incorporated your own characters and such. I was simply blown away (the evidence of which are the bloody tissues littering my room).
I cannot wait for chapter twenty-nine.
*grips a box of tissues to her chest and continually refreshes the story*
=D Ja ne!
Because let's face it, Sesshomaru takes it up the ass rough, and he likes it. =D
But seriously, I love how you incorporated your own characters and such. I was simply blown away (the evidence of which are the bloody tissues littering my room).
I cannot wait for chapter twenty-nine.
*grips a box of tissues to her chest and continually refreshes the story*
=D Ja ne!
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November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really really really love this story and please please please update soon
i just hope that Inuyasha is far from dying...
they just got reunited and Sesshomaru is just being a brother to Inuyasha for the very first time...
please this story is very unique and im in love with it the 1st time i read it! and i just read the entire chapter for almost 3days...gosh!
i really love how the direction of the story and its very interesting
what happen to inuyasha?
i just hope he is fine somehow...
i just hope that Inuyasha is far from dying...
they just got reunited and Sesshomaru is just being a brother to Inuyasha for the very first time...
please this story is very unique and im in love with it the 1st time i read it! and i just read the entire chapter for almost 3days...gosh!
i really love how the direction of the story and its very interesting
what happen to inuyasha?
i just hope he is fine somehow...
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November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When's the next chapter? I'm addicted to this story and need my fix. If you need ideas I have one, if you don't want the opinion of a fan, ignore the next bit.
What if Inuyasha continued to change from to the other and back again? After the second or third time, frightened and concerned for his brother and the obvious pain he's going through Sesshomaru takes him back inside and straight to Daigon who can't find how to stop it or what's causing it, however he logically theorizes that since it was caused by Inuyashas' human period, it SHOULD stop at dawn.
Meanwhile all he can do is sedate the hanyou deeply and wait.
He leaves Sesshomaru in the room where he sits by his brothers side the entire night, talking soothingly to him, telling him stories about himself, their father and so on, stroking his mark on Inuyasha if the pain gets too much for even the sedative to handle.
Then, at dawn, he's relieved to witness his brother change to hanyou one more time then stay that way, dropping into an exhausted sleep. When Daigon returns to examine him, he announces he's clear, at least until tomorrow night.
Sesshomaru decides after a lot of thinking that they should leave as soon as Inuyasha wakes up, but Daigon protests they should stay at least two more nights, just in case it happens again. However Sesshomaru knows his brother, he knows the hanyou will be more than pissed if they treat him as an invalid because of what happened and he will want to get moving, even if he goes without them. However the wind elemental has permission to set something up, just in case.
When Inuyasha awakes he is quiet, reserved and not talkative, looking at Sesshomaru strangely and at first it concerns Sesshomaru, thinking he's done something wrong again, but then when he sees the way his brother watches him when he thinks he doesn't see it is thoughtful and peaceful, as if he is looking at his brother in a different light.
And indeed he is.
The conversation they had about Inuyasha being more open with Sesshomaru and 'meeting him halfway' plus the clouded but soothing memories of his brothers actions the night before has Inuyasha seriously considering his brother as different, in a GOOD way. After all, nothing like being cared for when you an weak and vulnerable to make you more open the the possibility and willing to try.
If Sesshomaru is extremely careful of his actions and attitude on the way back, is open and honest, gentle and soothing (but not so much Inuyasha feels babied or like he's being pitied) then chances are by the time they return to the castle Inuyasha will be more open to the possibility of being with his brother longer so they can work on their relationship.
Or there is another way to do it, Inuyasha DOESN'T regain consciousness the next day and Sesshomaru gets them moving back to castle the next day as fast as possible.
Why? Because he wants his brother in an safe and trusted environment while he seeks out the source of two possible ways to save his brother and BOTH lead to a certain someone.After all, wasn't it their father who told him he needed someone to protect? Besides, his inner little Sesshy told him until the two of them were one he would never be more powerful then he was then. How much more in sync can you be then saving and healing your little brother and mate?
What if Inuyasha continued to change from to the other and back again? After the second or third time, frightened and concerned for his brother and the obvious pain he's going through Sesshomaru takes him back inside and straight to Daigon who can't find how to stop it or what's causing it, however he logically theorizes that since it was caused by Inuyashas' human period, it SHOULD stop at dawn.
Meanwhile all he can do is sedate the hanyou deeply and wait.
He leaves Sesshomaru in the room where he sits by his brothers side the entire night, talking soothingly to him, telling him stories about himself, their father and so on, stroking his mark on Inuyasha if the pain gets too much for even the sedative to handle.
Then, at dawn, he's relieved to witness his brother change to hanyou one more time then stay that way, dropping into an exhausted sleep. When Daigon returns to examine him, he announces he's clear, at least until tomorrow night.
Sesshomaru decides after a lot of thinking that they should leave as soon as Inuyasha wakes up, but Daigon protests they should stay at least two more nights, just in case it happens again. However Sesshomaru knows his brother, he knows the hanyou will be more than pissed if they treat him as an invalid because of what happened and he will want to get moving, even if he goes without them. However the wind elemental has permission to set something up, just in case.
When Inuyasha awakes he is quiet, reserved and not talkative, looking at Sesshomaru strangely and at first it concerns Sesshomaru, thinking he's done something wrong again, but then when he sees the way his brother watches him when he thinks he doesn't see it is thoughtful and peaceful, as if he is looking at his brother in a different light.
And indeed he is.
The conversation they had about Inuyasha being more open with Sesshomaru and 'meeting him halfway' plus the clouded but soothing memories of his brothers actions the night before has Inuyasha seriously considering his brother as different, in a GOOD way. After all, nothing like being cared for when you an weak and vulnerable to make you more open the the possibility and willing to try.
If Sesshomaru is extremely careful of his actions and attitude on the way back, is open and honest, gentle and soothing (but not so much Inuyasha feels babied or like he's being pitied) then chances are by the time they return to the castle Inuyasha will be more open to the possibility of being with his brother longer so they can work on their relationship.
Or there is another way to do it, Inuyasha DOESN'T regain consciousness the next day and Sesshomaru gets them moving back to castle the next day as fast as possible.
Why? Because he wants his brother in an safe and trusted environment while he seeks out the source of two possible ways to save his brother and BOTH lead to a certain someone.After all, wasn't it their father who told him he needed someone to protect? Besides, his inner little Sesshy told him until the two of them were one he would never be more powerful then he was then. How much more in sync can you be then saving and healing your little brother and mate?
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November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is my second review, sorry about the last. I just wanted to add I love your story because to me it's more realistic. I mean I've read other Inuyasha\Sesshomaru stories where it's been I hate you, I hate you, I hate you, I HATE YOU! next chapter, oooHHH we are so in love! I mean come on, two chapters and they suddenly love each other? Two chapters is NOT going to solve at least two hundred years of mental and physical abuse!
In YOUR story you can actually see them working at it, well SESSHOMARU working at it. Building a friendship or love is an constant working process, it's give and take on both sides, now that Inuyasha's more willing it can really begin to start.
I know the quick and easy way is romantic to a lot of people, but a true love or relationship needs work, and here I can actually SEE that work.
Keep up the good work!
In YOUR story you can actually see them working at it, well SESSHOMARU working at it. Building a friendship or love is an constant working process, it's give and take on both sides, now that Inuyasha's more willing it can really begin to start.
I know the quick and easy way is romantic to a lot of people, but a true love or relationship needs work, and here I can actually SEE that work.
Keep up the good work!
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November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I stumbled upon this recently, and it took me a while to get through it, but I will say that I enjoy(ed) it. Immensely, in fact. It's not very often you find a well written fic that has Sesshomaru as uke. That and the story line's, compelling and original. I'll be looking out for updates. :D
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October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
more i need more, i must know what is happening to our little yasha. Very good story I must say I enjoy it and its not totally ooc like some shess-inu stories its belivable that this could happen.
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October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohhh my god! that was a great story, i really can't wait for more to come.
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHY DID YOU STOP THERE?! You absolutely must update soon. Like tomorrow soon. Even better, like today soon! You cannot possibly leave us there! UGH! Cliff Hangers! I'm going to die from the suspense! You are positively evil. I hope you are aware of this fact. I'm going to go sulk in my corner now.