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May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
really great chappie gald you put it up. can't wait for more to come.
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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the wonderful sess/inu stories I've read in a while- I am absolutely loving where this going and can not wait to read more- Thank you for writing this-
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April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. Sesshomaru coming to terms with the pain Inuyasha endured growing up, made me cry and was such a deep catalyst for the character's change of heart, and the very heart breaking view of InunoTashis's struggle to stave off death to be there for his sons, his own tragic story with his parents. You have a deft touch with pain and angst without making it unbearable. I check daily for more of your stories but fear what may happen next in this one, cause I'm terrified that Inuyasha will die, but I'm hoping it is just adulthood having the human, ( which is technically beyond a normal human life span)fading away and letting the demon dominate. But I know I'll read even if it goes badly just to make sure where the story will go. I really hope you are still writing and living and happy. Talent telling stories is rare and you are a rare talent.
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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Finally got all the way through the story (as posted so far). Absolutely marvelous. The characterizations are dramatic and work very well, and while each character has his/her own strength, they're also believably flawed. I love it and can't wait for more.
With regards to the last chapter, the background story was fascinating. It provided a great deal of depth, but was also amazingly well told. I'm sorry that it could not have been written during happier times.
With regards to the last chapter, the background story was fascinating. It provided a great deal of depth, but was also amazingly well told. I'm sorry that it could not have been written during happier times.
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March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi
My name is Tina
I love this fic since the first chapter,
You have no idea how I'm rereading the chapters until you create a new .. (Its my life)
is perfect it has everything a little bit and still find myself wanting more ....
Sorry I look like a vampire and when we talk about quality work the more I want to read and reread ... Until the next capitudo there is freshly and ready to be read.
I followed this beautiful piece of art ...
But unfortunately the Fic is hidden ....
I did not understand the reasons but I hope what has happened is resolved soon.
Well thank you for now
I am extremely grateful that you are editing your work on another site it would be a sad loss if we lose this wonderful work.
Kisses and Hugs Tina
please forgive me for my mistakes english is not my native language ....
My name is Tina
I love this fic since the first chapter,
You have no idea how I'm rereading the chapters until you create a new .. (Its my life)
is perfect it has everything a little bit and still find myself wanting more ....
Sorry I look like a vampire and when we talk about quality work the more I want to read and reread ... Until the next capitudo there is freshly and ready to be read.
I followed this beautiful piece of art ...
But unfortunately the Fic is hidden ....
I did not understand the reasons but I hope what has happened is resolved soon.
Well thank you for now
I am extremely grateful that you are editing your work on another site it would be a sad loss if we lose this wonderful work.
Kisses and Hugs Tina
please forgive me for my mistakes english is not my native language ....
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March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
“I know that!” Daigon snapped.
I thought Daigon didn't refer to himself in the first person?
I thought Daigon didn't refer to himself in the first person?
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March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh it was so very good and I hope you do write more
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to have inuyasha be the uke or bottom? It just seems weird for the wayyyy older brother to be the uke to me is all.
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March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Authors are they own worst critics are they not?
You did a fine job, don't change a thing. :)
Feel sorry for Inupapa... to feel the cause of your father's death.
Betcha it made him 'grow-up' faster ne?
You did a fine job, don't change a thing. :)
Feel sorry for Inupapa... to feel the cause of your father's death.
Betcha it made him 'grow-up' faster ne?
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March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! You have gotten me so addicted to this story.
I've been up for two days, unable to put this down. It's amazing how anyone could write this much...You must be well over 1000 pages in this story by now.
Gah I love this story so much! By far, my FAVORITE SesshomaruxInuyasha fanfiction EVER.
I eagerly await your next chapter :3
I've been up for two days, unable to put this down. It's amazing how anyone could write this much...You must be well over 1000 pages in this story by now.
Gah I love this story so much! By far, my FAVORITE SesshomaruxInuyasha fanfiction EVER.
I eagerly await your next chapter :3