rate_review Reviews

Hmm.. so 3 months nearly since this story has been updated. I have really enjoyed reading this but this is probably as far as it goes, it would figure that every time I find a reasonably good fic to read it appears to have been abandoned and it looks like Inuyasha is gonna get killed off anyway as that's the only way he will ever get the peace he wants. Oh well guess its back to searching as I don't enjoy deathfics and unfortunately most of the authors don't give adequate warning regarding deathfics and I'm extremely sensitive to them, I have enough angst I don't need to read about death too. If this story ever gets finished I might come back to see how it ended though I doubt it will at this stage as about 90% of the stories on here never get finished especially once they have reached this length.

Oh Yami, I hope that's not the case =( I need this story to have an ending... And the author says on his Author Page that he doesn't abandon stories... Maybe life has sunk its claws into him and is keeping him from writing? I know how that is from personal experience so I'm giving him the benefit of a doubt. *nods firmly* I will be checking on this story regularly! *crosses arms stubbornly*

...*HUGE puppy dog eyes of DOOM* Pleeeeease update this wonderful story soon? I've been reading this thing for quite some time now--would have read it faster, but life likes to get in the way of my yaoi-me time--and I've seriously fallen in LOVE with this thing!!! Yes, there are grammatical errors here and there, but they don't take away from the story and I still get what you're try to say. I seriously LOVE your take on the demon's instinctual half and more rational one, never read that before XD at least for Sessy, and you're SO good at bringing out their personalities! I can truly just see them saying every line you write! Brilliant I tell you. ;)

So PLEASE... with cute Yash's on top (never EVER heard of his named being shortened to that, and I just love it) update this story of yours VERY soon!!!!!! And... i need more ass penetration, but I can be a patient yaoi fangirl... *blinks innocently*

I love this story, it just keeps getting better and better. I'm glad you don't have Inuyasha forgive Seshomaru right away, I like that he has to work for it and that Inuyasha acts a bit more maturly. I think your original characters are very beleivable and foxy boy is very cute. I'm kind of put off by your Kagome bashing though i think the story would be better if you portrayed her as simply a distant and very different friend instead of a stupid enemy. Other then that its a fantastic story and its great to see someone take their work so seriously.

Interesting story; I like the way you're characterizing the brothers. Having plowed through 30 chapters, I sincerely hope that you haven't abandoned the tale. My only complaint would be that you need to use your spell checker, and you *really* need a beta.

I like long stories, and this one does satisfy. Keep it coming, please.

Kagome doesn't wear pants for a very good reason. R. Takahashi says that she only wants Kagome in short skirts.

Source: InuYasha Profiles Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan Inc. (c)2003

about #30

I'm FINALLY caught up from reading all these chapters
and I gotta say, you have some looong chapters.

I have to say of all the chapters..#24 was my favorite!
I LOVED the action in it and the fact Inuyasha was so
serious and knew what the others didn't about the bog.

I also I have to give props on #30. It was HILARIOUS!
The Terrible Infant Sesshomaru!!! I would loved to have
heard one more story on what he did as a child. :-)

I absolutely love this story and I hope you do continue. I have spent three nights seriously reading your story and when I get a break from my therapy and stuff I have to do at home I read your story. I stayed up until almost 3 am last night trying to finish it only to find there was so much more. Please, you are a fantastic author and I could believe you can almost sell this story if that were legal.
My stories that I write on here are not usually that long in chapter, but I feel something pulling me towards this tale you have geniously devised. Every word is incredible and I fill in the blanks when you have an error knowing exactly what you are trying to portray. I am inspired and hope you will continue providing the eloquent words you have in your mind to each and every chapter until this is finished.

Poor Inu. i know he must be getting tired mentallya nd physically, hope this doesnt sound mean just pity kinda. I hope he does die b4 Sessh can get to him. hes been through alot and he wants peace. poor inu update soon please!

NO! are you really going to kill Inuyasha? please dont hes just to cute and his life was just getting good! *cries*
Anyways great story! please update really soon!