rate_review Reviews

You know I've read this story at least three times and I don't think I've ever given you an in depth review. So here goes nothing.
I like the fact that your plot is well thought out. The canon characters are still themselves and behave realistically to the situations you put them in. (considering this is yaoi) You didn't fall into the trap of creating Mary sue characters that were just too unbelievable. Your original characters are convincing but don't take over the story. You do comedy very well and that alone makes you very unique to fanfiction. Other than the fact I think you need a good Beta to spell check for you. Your story is great and I wouldn't change a thing.

Fantastic chapter, as always. It was a good surprise to see that you had finally updated, this is one of the few unfinished long time between update stories that pulls me right back in every new chapter no matter how long it's been.

This story just keeps getting better and better. I'm sad Inuyasha seems to be slowly dying and mad that Naraku would pick *NOW* of all times to show up. Just Inu's luck, life is not far sometimes. Don't really want Inu to die, but I really want him to stop being in so much pain, it's horrible.

I'm sorry about the deaths in your family :( Even when you don't know them very well it's just a painful reminder that drags you down; I wish you the best. This chapter got me close to tears, the mood you were going for was portrayed seamlessly, and I thought I'd let you know I hang on your every word not cause it's fanfiction, but because I love your writing C:> Get better and keep making art <3

But... BUT I DUN WANNA SUCK IT!!!!! I had to suck it LAST chapter!!!! XDDD HOW CAN YOU DO THIS--*goes on feverish rant and rails on everything*

I'm glad yer back, matey ^.^ I'm SO very sorry for all your losses... You'll be in my prayers *huggies* I hope life treats you better soon.

Wow, really bad time for Naraku to come.

Ok so I have never reviewed this story before, I found it while u were on hiatus. I am in love with this story, finally someone has inu tell kagome about that DAMN NECKLACE!!!!! I hate that everyone makes like he wants it. I love YOUR SESSHY personality, he has gone through an awesome transformation. BUT I have to ask how come sesshey can't tell what is going on with inuyasha, like when they went for a walk after his fight with the girl? Keep up the story can't wait for the next chapter.

OMG, OMG, OMFG!!! Holy shit I've stayed up late just to read this cuz I love you soooo much and you leave me with a cliffy like that?? I think I'm going to cry. What an awesome job, well worth the wait. And sorry to hear about your troubles, seems you just can't catch a break huh? Well, I hope that the next chapter comes VERY soon because with an ending like that...I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!

No good sir you, suck it.
And write me another chapter. With no dead Inuyashas.
I have spoken.


Just kidding. LOL.

Poor Inu I hope things work out in the end.