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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAAAHHHHOOOOOOOOO AND UPDATE U ROCK THE STORY TOO OF COURSE can we have another one ?????? (puppy eyes) PLEASE
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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it is always a pleasure to find a new chapter up of your story. Excellent as always.
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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
long time no see. miss this story, so glad your back, can't wait for more to come next.
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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update I am happy. I hate to wait for another update but I will try.
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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAA! A new chap!!! I LOVE YOU!! Its been sooooo long!! And you just left us with another cliff hanger!!! You're so mean!!! MOREEEEEEE!! Please!!
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January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was gut wrenching! Having Sesshomaru live through Inuyasha's most painful moments, feeling what he was feeling, hearing his thoughts, was the most powerful lesson in growing up that could EVER be visited upon Sesshomaru. Still wish his youki would kick his ass into the ground, though. I love how creative and exciting this story is. The action and fighting is beyond awesome, and the building of emotional tension is highly effective. Great story!
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January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That's an amazing back story you've come up with, and I'm in awe of the insight we now have into Sesshomaru's past and perspective, and I can't love enough the conflict between "This Sesshomaru" and "That Sesshomaru." I LOVE how his youki is punishing him and is mocking him. This story is becomming more and more complex, and it's very exciting.
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December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was amazingly satisfying. Venting vicariously via Inuyasha has brought such relief! The bigger, stronger body, the senseless destruction and violence, and, most important of all, the utter stomping flat of Sesshomaru physically, emotionally, and rationally, has left me feeling limp and sated. Ahhhhhh. Now that's what I'm talking about. I also very much like this concept of growth stages and reaching different levels of maturity, as well as the lack of knowledge of Hanyou growth.
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December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy smokes! That was unbelievable! Gut wrenching, in fact. What is it about Inuyasha that invites the most selfish, abusive side of others to come out and play with him? He's caring and strong, and OK, abrasive and curses a lot, but so what? His fine qualities far outweigh any of his negative traits. So, what about him leads others to feel free to use him as their whipping boy? It's probably because he is so caring, and because he's so gentle with those who are weaker than him and who are under his protection, they take that as an invitation to use him as a mat. Now he's given them some food for thought. How I hope their thoughts turn introspective, and how they see what they have done. It'll be hard for them to face their inner demons when they think so highly of themselves, and that they are superior and are the "good guys," when in fact they are nothing better than abusers themselves. That was a very powerful scene, the blow up with his pack. Damn Kagome for making him force her to take that thrice damned rosary off. She should have willingly done so if she was thinking of becoming engaged to him.
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December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That fight was AWESOME! Wow, did they both take a pounding, but in the end, Sesshomaru got it good. Funniest thing EVER - Inuyasha coming back to himself and hightailing it as quick as his legs could move. So freakin' funny. What ever happened to enjoying the afterglow indeed. LOVED more than anything your take on "This Sesshomaru" and "That Sesshomaru." The inner youkai voices are cool characters in their own right.