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for It's my Life

by MadMaxxCoyote

person Hatii
schedule July 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
For the past 3 days I have religiously read your story, falling asleep with my laptop on my chest in mid sentence, coming straight home from work to cuddle up and pick up where I left off.

From chapter 1 to chapter 33 I was taken to another world, you're talented with both description and dialogue and you have found quite the balance with them both, a hard feat, even for published writers.

I'm quite in love with your style, your story and your characters.

I just wanted to let you know you have one more fan who is eagerly waiting the next chapter.
person inuv5
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! I have been reading all of it non stop for like 2 days. I hope you update really soon. I can't wait to see what Sess is going to do to Naraku. Poor Inu!
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update soon. I want to see what Diagon dose to Kagura.I love this story and have been waiting a long time for it to be updated so PLEASE update again soon. ~Geets on her knees and begs~


All my love The Maiden Lyra
maiden6of6the6dark@yahoo.com
person Vyper
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Inuyasha. I want him to be better! Damnit make him well again!
person EarlyDawn
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
(sobs in happiness) I had just been wondering why all my favorite stories haven
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
For chapter 32. Sorry I never reviewed before. Now that I am writing as well I realized how nice it is to hear from the fans. I love this story so so much the constant action, how in character everyone is. The characters you have come up with are amazing I adore little Artious (forgive me I'm pretty sure I spelled that wrong) Tren and Alir (that one too) are awesome they are my favorite. They way you write Sesshomaru is wonderful, that scene with him in the meeting imagining everyone asking him to kill them was hilarious. And when he gets pissed at the end, wow I could really feel his anger. You are a very talented writer I am always waiting on the edge of my seat for your next update. So thank you very much for writing I love your work.
person Shapooda
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I felt the need to tell you how thrilled I am with your story...again CX I check every week or every day depending on my mood for an update from any of your stories, not just this one. I've re-read It's My Life about three times now C:> I'm never tired of your writing, it's fantastic! And I read A LOT. Clive Cussler, patterson, Modessit, you name it, and you're up there with my favs CX you're ability to write arguments and handle conversation between several people and your tension building is enough to make you a master C: I just wanted you to know how good you are XD I hope life is treating you better. From your past updates it sounded like life was hitting you pretty hard from all directions. If it hasn't gotten better, I hope that it does and you at least find comfort doing what you love C:>


(Also, in case you never watched or read the end of Inuyasha, Sessoumaru does get his arm back, and he loses Tokijin and get a new Sword; Baksusaiga. Looks like some crazy ass techno sword to me haha And Inuyasha gets the Meido and cat send people to the underworld C: I don't give a shit what you do with that if you weren't aware, because I'm just thrilled to read what you have XD Well, you have a fan C: ) (I hope I didn't post this twice; stupid internet)
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't have words for how awesome that chapter was. I love the rage you sent Sesshomaru into the pure fury of it was amazing. Thank you so much for not letting Nuraku go through with the rape. Poor Miroku got left behind. I bet he some how shows up in the nick of time. I so can't wait for your next up date. I feel so inspired by your writing I am gonna have to step up my game in the action department if I ever hope to write something that comes anywhere near the awesomeness of this story. The battle scenes you write are so increasable, you really put the reader into the fight. Wow I wonder what the fight between Sesshomaru and that thing is going to be like. Oh so so can't wait till update. Thank you!!!!!!
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was a great chapter! I love the detail of how Sesshomaru tried so hard to cut the barrier. I didn't love the torturing Inuyasha part, but it was part of the story and gives great motivation to the other characters. Please update soon!
person Anon
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! An update. I'm always ready for a new chapter of this story, which I have been reading over the past 4 years when it was started on another site.

Poor Inu. It seems as though he does nothing but suffer lately. I'm holding on for when things take a turn for the better. He is still so strong of mind, even when his body is weak. I'm hoping after this, he will begin to see just what he now means to his brother and the lengths Sesso is willing to go for him. I'm also really feeling sorry for Sessho. His life has just been turn upside down. If it wasn't for the fact that he has something more precious that ever to gain, I wouldn't know how he deals with it all. I guess that thing about your greatest weakness being your greatest strength would be applicable here.

As for Daigon, I can't wait to see him in battle. Kagura is definitely SOL. Her abilities couldn't be a worse match against his.

As always, I wait anxiously for the next installment.