Oh my you updated and it is gorgeous, I hope you are able to continue with this brilliant piece of work. It is extremely enjoyable and I appreciate your hard work.
YOU CAME BACK!!!! I had kinda given up on this story (feels like over a year ago) but I just felt a random urge to check again anyway and what do I find. A new chapter. You're so beautifull! Thank you!!!! Now to re-read the whole thing!!! XD
I dont know how many years i have waited. if it hasn't been years, then it felt like it! but i must say the wait has been filled. but then i reach the end of the chapter and all i could think of is " omg yes!, wait thats it? NO!" i love your work and i hope you are able to put out more i refuse to give up on this story! it has made me laugh, cry and worry along with the characters.
I loved this story so much that I actually read all of your stories on this site, including the original ones, and I, being the greedy fan that I am, would love new chapters and stories on all of them, heh. You write sexual tension awesome, but you write characters really really well and it keeps the reader entertained. Honestly you can see how much you've gotten better as a writer from the first chapter to the last in this story. I really appreciate a writer who is consistint with adding chapters and finishing a story, even if it's just to let the reader know how it should have ended. A well written story stays with a person. I still reread some of my favorite fanfics from 10 years ago, lol circa gundam wing. Love this story, love your writing, and I hope you continue to put out new content too.
I am thrilled to see a new chapter and would love to see more. I am enjoying your story immensely and am looking forward to seeing where it goes and when Inuyasha get his memory back. I think the back story for the brothers family that you have created is really fantastic. You have a talent for writing and storytelling. It's compelling.
Just get them to fucking each other will ya. If U made a Sequel to this story what's it's called.
This Chapter remindes me of a Book CALLED (Paradox by A. J. Paquette) I read it when I was in school.
If You ever seen the movie (Trimmers) , the Creature is almost alike. In Trimmers there are three OR four to the first movie, in the first movie, there are two different Creatures that come in two and three, each have a different name, the first is called (Graboy), The Second is called (Heatseaker), The Teared is called (Assblaster).
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By the way that was Chapter 22 jus so You know; but SO FAR I LOVE HOW IT'S GOING. ;) :) ;P
One more thing, I'm not trying to sound mean; but I think READERS might like it if You put more kikywords in, I know I do, (shying with a smill) ;)
This is by far one of my very best stories I have read on aff. It had been a very long time since you updated this and I was starting to get worried you never would. But you did! And it's a really good chapter and then you got us With that ending. Evil cliff hangers. Well I can't wait for more! Just wanted you to know that I think this story is great and I am looking forward to the next chapter
- Eddi