rate_review Reviews

i LOVE this story! i love how even though you have soo many characters, that you havent created more then you cant handle. everything seems perfect and seems to fit! i wish you would update soon, ive been DYING to know what happens!! ive reread this story twice now, i think.

I don't want to tell you to hurry, cuz I know it's not helpful, so instead I shall make ignorable suggestions for things I'd love to see, if that would help.
1. sess playing with inuyasha's tail
2. rematch play fight
3. kagome dies or gets sent home
4. sess takes in shippo anyway and him and rin become homies
5. inuyasha should realize that he has sex appeal and use it against sess
6. lol inuyasha should have sess "trained" with a command word that means bend over or something

so yeah just generally ideas i would love to see in your writing, but I would love you story the same no matter how you write it 'cuz your now easily at least #2 in my top ten but you may even be #1 b/c the other #1 isn't looking as cool compared to you =D
alright hope this helps bye!

to be continued???!! WTF!?? HAHAHA. I WANT AN UPDATE!! ITs beeen too looonng!!

hi there!
another great chapter. i hope you do 36 soon, i can't wait for some more smushy sess/inu moments.
terra

This is a really good story, I have been following it from chapter 29. This last chapter was one of the best fighting scenes I have ever read. But, I have to question, where is Daigon?

That battle scene was epic...but what are they going to do about Miroku and Inuyasha? I mean Inuyasha might not know how to change back into humanoid form...and Miroku is poisoned. I look forward to the next chapter!

I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I AM SO SERIOUS RIGHT NOW! I KNOW IT'S NOT EXACTLY GOOD MANNORS TO WRITE IN ALL CAPS BUT THIS CHAPTER WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE OR PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! DEAR LORD THIS CHAPTER ROCKED!!!

HOLY SHIT I love this story. It's kind of stupid how much I look forward to this XD It's like, your stories, and Dexter. I refresh your page at least once a week if not more, and I'm never disappointed. You have a knack for making everything seem so real. You fleshed out these characters more than we ever could have prayed for in the actual show and you do everything I wish had actually happened. You have a fan C:> The day you stop writing will be a dark day in my life.

now that was worth waiting for. I can not wait for the next chapter.

My vocabulary is not big enough to accurately describe how amazingly, awesomely epic that chapter was! That was the most action packed, gore filled, thriller of a chapter I have ever read and I was on the edge of me seat the whole time! You are amazing, I love it, I love it, I love it!!!!! The best story ever! I soooo can't wait for next chapter, your writing is amazing! Thank you so much for sharing it with us Inu fans.