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September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great start, but horrible end. Only because it left me wanting to read more. I can see this turning in to a really good story. Like for then next chapter she does go back and tells them that she has to go home, but doesn't and she goes off with sesshomaru, but only till he was better. And when he gets better he and her go about what they use to be. But behind tall trees they are their hot spring lovers. Please tell me your going to do another one.
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!!! I just loved how you portrait sesshoumaru, I can honestly tell you this is one of the best one shots I have ever read and I wouldn't mind a second part. You're a talented writer. AWESOME STORY!!!!! ;)
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was incredible. It was beautifully written and I was kind of sorry to see it end. It was so touching to see them caring for each other. Great job.
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Its we passed a spring, not past
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You should continue this story! This is amazing! I hope you do and update it soon!