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by Waterunleashed

person reader00
schedule December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story! It is one of the best!
person yinfox07
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was pretty good. when are you gonna update? update soon.
person CC
schedule December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Its nice to read a story with both a good plot and dirty smut! I'm all for the warm fluffy parts but I love how you keep the sex parts kinky and not flowery. This is AFF for a reason! I also don't think the excuse for sexing is that cliche, either. It's a nice premise, with lots of interesting connotations (fluids and markings and dominance) that isn't depressing or squickily dark despite its concepts. My only complaint would be that some of the sentences are run-on, but its more a grammatical error than flawed writing and you could probably fix them easily with some revisions or the help of a beta.

Thanks for sharing!
schedule November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait 2 read more. poor kags having 2 go through that bastards BS... would he have prefered her b w/ kouga? sheesh bastards selfish 2 want 2 keep both incarnations of kikyou 2 himself. please update soon.
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you haven't forgotten this story...its way too good to not continue, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish this story, I beg you!!
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
update soon i have to see what happens next
person lara5170
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh please tell me there is more cause right now in your story I'm so angry at both Inu bros
person NIniva
schedule July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ive been waiting for soo long for this to continue and I was not disappointed. So Happy <3 cant wait for the next chapie hope it doesnt take long but I know you cant rush things so until next time =^_^= Nya
person bluevixen
schedule July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is pretty good update soon.
schedule July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I cannot wait for the next update. HOOKED. =D