rate_review Reviews

Please update this story! It is one of the best!

that was pretty good. when are you gonna update? update soon.

Its nice to read a story with both a good plot and dirty smut! I'm all for the warm fluffy parts but I love how you keep the sex parts kinky and not flowery. This is AFF for a reason! I also don't think the excuse for sexing is that cliche, either. It's a nice premise, with lots of interesting connotations (fluids and markings and dominance) that isn't depressing or squickily dark despite its concepts. My only complaint would be that some of the sentences are run-on, but its more a grammatical error than flawed writing and you could probably fix them easily with some revisions or the help of a beta.

Thanks for sharing!

i cant wait 2 read more. poor kags having 2 go through that bastards BS... would he have prefered her b w/ kouga? sheesh bastards selfish 2 want 2 keep both incarnations of kikyou 2 himself. please update soon.

Please tell me you haven't forgotten this story...its way too good to not continue, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish this story, I beg you!!

update soon i have to see what happens next

oh please tell me there is more cause right now in your story I'm so angry at both Inu bros

Ive been waiting for soo long for this to continue and I was not disappointed. So Happy <3 cant wait for the next chapie hope it doesnt take long but I know you cant rush things so until next time =^_^= Nya

this is pretty good update soon.

I cannot wait for the next update. HOOKED. =D