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i feel like it should be a draw and they are both hurt equally

I don't want Sesshy to lose!!! Make the result even. Or they could stop fighting when Sesshoumaru sees that Ban is strong and can protect Inuyasha. Although the Alpha issue is hard. Since Sesshoumaru had to let go of Inuyasha as a son, it might be hard for him to let go of the fact that he should be the pupies Alpha.
I think Sesshoumaru's expalnation was good. The fact that he actually considered Izaoy even if for a brief moment was so sweet and tragic.
I really enjoyed this chapter and waiting for the next one. Inuyasha will surely enjoy watching his poor excuse of a father getting knocked around for a bit. XDD

I would make their fight a tie because both are very strong and it would hurt the balance of Alpha. So maybe InuYasha could stop it...maybe it triggers his maturity or something. Because I realy don't want Sess to be defeated...I like the arogant demon. Maybe Naruku comes and try something. That is just my opinion...anyway great chapter.

I don't know where this is going but I think you're a genius! Sesshoumaru Inuyasha's father!!!! XD That is just great! XDD I have so many ideas running through my head right now! Was he trying to protect Inuyasha? Would our puppy have been killed by thers if the yokai society found out that the future Lord of the West has a Hanyou son? Making Inuyasha Seshoumaru's brother was safer if the Hanyou was in danger. Now he's strong and can defend himself. Is that it? Or close? XD I'll wait and see what you came up with. I'm also very curious now about Inuyasha's mother. Seshoumaru loved her? Or was it just a mistake form his point of view that he took her and didn't think she will become pregnant? I really hope he had some affection for her. Inuyasha would be furious with him for not helping her and letting her die just like that but I still think that even so it would be better. And more dramatic. Um... it would also mean that Seshoumaru cared for Inuyasha more than he wants to admit. Wanting him safe in that twisted way, making himself be the utter bastart, everything so that Inuyasha could grew strong... I like this Sesshoumaru. XD
Okay, I'll wait and see where you're go with the story. XD Great work!

SESS IS INU FATHER!!!!!!! Wow, you certainly know how to shake up a story and that was a shake-up...please don't leave me hanging to long I just have to know what is going on. So many questions...

You are a brilliant writer...trapping me again in the tale you weave.

I have been reading your story recently and I have to say that last chapter was a total shock. I was for sure you were going to write something else, but this was perfect. I cannot wait till the next chapter.

Wonderful story!! I can't wait to see what happens next, please update soon!

Really enjoying this story. A few errors here and there, but nothing major.
See you next chappie!

I've never watched the Getbackers. I love your writing though. Such a great job! I'm glad Ban seems to understand Inuyasha. great job!

What happened to Inuyasha? How will he get back? what will this mean?! I'm glad that Ban was there to take care of things. great job!