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for Serpents and Dog Demons

by ajj77sunhawk

person ookamiakai
schedule July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
One of my favorite stories to read. I can't get enough of it. This is the third or fourth time I've read it. Time to check other stories you may have written.
person Drace
schedule February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Agh, a cliffie! I found your fic and read it all the way through in one sitting and then encounted the dreaded cliffie. And at such an aggravating spot too. Please tell me you are updating this soon. Ban taking Inuyasha to the world of the Get Backers and seeing everyone's reactions is going to be so good. Please update soon, pretty pretty pretty please?
schedule June 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
woah. it's been awhile. I reread the whole thing and I still love it. I really must say I like Sesshomaru being his father. I think it's such a unique idea! I think the ceremony and the time after was perfect. they deserved the chance to relax and romp around with each other. I must admit I'm extremely curious about the child. Good explanation for why it would take so long as well. :D I must admit I really like the idea of Inuyasha meeting Ban's people. great job and can't wait for more. ^^
person eilidhdawn
schedule June 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
happy dance
keep writing
thank you

person avid
schedule May 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just had to reread the whole story again. I enjoy your work so much I've. Read almost all. your stories there. Great
person eilidhdawn
schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hope you have fuuly recovered
i really like your writing is there more to come
pretty please
person Dawn
schedule November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please please write more
schedule August 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH where they heck have I been???? I was reading this before and then stop for some reason. I'm glad I did though I took the night to read and catch up. I really love when you had Inuyasha and Sesshomaru run together. I have always wanted to read that in a fic have then run side by side in Inu form. and the part with the beads * I hate kagome* oh so many parts lets see Luke I mean Inuyahsa I am your father. Ohohohohoho Ban giving Kagome a spanking freaking epic. ok there are way to many parts in this i love so ya thank you. I always enjoy your writing. Catch you with your other fic and any new ones your genus mind comes up with.
person keomah
schedule July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked the way you explained Inuyasha's new mature powers. It made sense. Nifty idea for the maturing of his Hijin Ketsusō attack! What about his Sankon Tessō attack? Did that mature too during his long sleep or is it still evolving? I can understand him not wanting to show it all off - that would be the mature thing to do of course... ;-) The Sankon Tessō I think is a bit like Ginji's lightening power. Pure energy controlled by will alone.

And I keep wondering if maybe Sesshoumaru started sending the invites out as soon as he and Ban finished their battle. Look at the size of the guest list - 500 beings!! I'm willing to bet that there are thousands of wedding planners who would like to pull off what he did. Food, clothes, decorations, music, invites, pre-honeymoon suite and a wonderful binding ceremony. I really enjoyed it! Not frilly or feminine at all. And like all weddings, the final moment for 'I do' is over oh so quickly. The idea for the bracers joining Inuyasha and Ban was cool - very nice!

Can't you just imagine Sesshoumaru 500 years later with a new job as the CEO of 'Magic Weddings'...lol

Thanks for another fine read!
Bibi
person Anon
schedule March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This has been an amazing journey. Please be sure to keep writing.