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by Luna4044

schedule April 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Please Please Please finish this story!!!!!!!!!!!

person snowbird
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I felt like crying while her mother was talking to her. It was so sad because I had a feeling that would be their last conversation for 500 years, at least for Kagome. I had to laugh when one of the items her mother packed for her was the history book. I can't wait to see what more it says about him and maybe her?
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow. I really like the way this story is going, but your sure keeping me on edge haha!

You did make me cry for Kagome and her mom, I think that her mom is one of the most brave people in the world. I also hope to see a new chapter soon, since I really want to know what is going to happen next.
person evilpinatag
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story Luna! I can't believe the plot! it's super interesting!
person snowbird
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! What a very intriging beginning. I can't wait for more. I hope you let their love build slowly. That tends to make for a better story most of the time. I was disappointed she didn't read the assigned pages on Sesshoumaru. I was very curious to know what more history had to say about him. Also, I'm glad she's no longer whining and bemoaning after Inuyasha. I've never thought he deserved her, even when I watched the anime. He was too verbally abusive at times and would lead her on with false hope by bouncing between her and Kikyo. Another thing, they never let her train to use and control her powers or to be a better fighter. She was always in the background holding Shippo or shooting arrows. That is whenever she wasn't in trouble and yelling for Inuyasha to rescue her. I'd be ashamed to be as helpless as she was in a battle. Anyway, I hope you make her a bit more powerful. I'm not expecting a wonder woman, but just a natural miko power where she can defend herself without having to constantly rely on someone else all the time.
person falien
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh that ending is twisted i cant wait for more please update soon
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooh................. I'm very much intrigued. I can't wait to see where this goes.