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for Ripples in Time

by Waterunleashed

schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I find this truly amazing! I love how you integrated Fae into the plot/story! Well done!
I dont read your author notes so if you have mentioned this... its my bad. If your really interested in reading about Fae, the Sidhe or the Seelie courts -which is the same thing mind you...- Read from an author called 'Karen Marie Moning'! She has a whole highlander series dedicated to Fae and Druids. Definitely read her Fever series.

Okay back to your story.
My heart goes out to Kagome. Everything has changed. And knowing that she is the cause just makes it worse. At least she has Sesshomaru!!! I hope they hit it off! I wonder if there is a rule that prevents Kagome from being with Sesshomaru?... that'd be horrible.
I can totally see Kagome being lost in Sesshomaru-goodness... *purrs* He should be one of those Death-by-sex-youkai! I could live by that... or die...

good luck!
You got me all excited for the next chap!
person kera
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i really like this story i trully hope u finish it. i would be so thankful if ud update me when u post a chap. plz and thanx

kera
person Neo-Crystal
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well..........damn! I have never read a story like this before. damn. PLEASE update soon! I REALLY REALLY REALLY want to read this story to its end!!
person Forgotten Echos
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I loved it! I hate when I get to the end. I don't ever want to stop reading it. It is so well writen. You have a way with story telling that pulls you in and you can't help but be on edge and wonder what's going to happen next. I eagerly await your next chapter. Thanks for a great tale!
person Forgotten Echos
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved your newest chapter. I felt such heartache when reading it. I think that you are a wonderful writer, and I can't wait until your next chapter. I will be patient though because I too am going to school and will be up to my ears in college papers. Eagerly awaiting your next update...but until then adiuex!
person evilpinatag
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH no! What did she do?1 Demons are alive? oo this is going to be good!
person Anon
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok so now I am completely and irrevocably enthralled with your story. So it is my guess that Kagome and her family are royalty in this new setting. So is Celeste going to find her and chew her out? I have a feeling that there is more to her and Sesshoumaru's relationship than mere guard. Am I correct in this assumption? I am very certain that you have become my favorite author. I am eagerly awaiting your next update. Until then Adieux!
person Forgotten Echos
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry an error occured when I reviewed the first time. Here is the original review. Again sorry for the trouble.Ok so now I am completely and irrevocably enthralled with your story. So it is my guess that Kagome and her family are royalty in this new setting. So is Celeste going to find her and chew her out? I have a feeling that there is more to her and Sesshoumaru's relationship than mere guard. Am I correct in this assumption? I am very certain that you have become my favorite author. I am eagerly awaiting your next update. Until then Adieux!
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sesshoumaru! It must be pretty embarassing for a demon like him to take such a thrashing! I'm very curious to know why the demons attacked him and stole his organ - and what the demons-only organ is. As for the butterfly, I'm assuming it's marking is a symbol of Kagome's hidden Sidhe heritage. Good job so far for weaving together an intriguing beginning to this story.
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I was a bit teary-eyed as Kagome said her goodbyes, especially to InuYasha. Although I don't like that pairing - they seem more like close brother and sister than lovers - I have nothing against InuYasha as a character. Now, I look forward to the changes that were wrought by Kagome's stay in the Feudal Era. As for constructive advice/criticism, I really haven't seen anything to complain about in this story. My pet peeves tend to be the poor use of grammar, spelling and punctuation, as well as plot lines that make absolutely no sense. I haven't spotted anything that merits pointing out, but if I do see something that needs correction I'll say so.