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for Ripples in Time

by Waterunleashed

person debee10
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
tht was a hott chapter!! im suppose to be studying for my senior exams but clearly this is more interesting. The complexity of the ritual was nicely done! please keep up the good work and cant wait for the nxt installment!
person Forgotten Echos
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As you well know, I absolutely loved this chapter. I can't wait for the next one (even though I have to *sigh*). You are very welcome, and wish me luck....this week is finals for me!!!! dun dun dun! You are truely talented and you so deserved the nomination (whoever it was that did it..good thinking). I wish you all the luck with school, homelife, and of course this story! Much love!
person Forgotten Echos
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey what's happened? I am pulling my hair out waiting for chapter 9! Don't quit on us now! :) I haven't even gotten another email from you either. Are you bogged down with finals? If so I totally understand. I have finals this week and I swear I am going insane with it. *sighs heavily* Oh well, it's gotta be done. Well I eagerly await your next chapter. If it takes much longer I may need a strait jacket though lmao!
schedule October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok, I'm dying here! more please!
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have indeed read the merry gentry series! you should write some fanfic for it. I loved Doyle!

On the other hand, OH NOES KAGOMEHHHHH!
person lb
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so entralled by this story, it is so unlike anything I have read before and I cannot wait to read more. You have a great skill for writing, Kag and Sess are very vivid and what ever is going on between them is killing me, I can't wait to learn what it is!
person Neo-Crystal
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...ah...now I'm getting as frustrated as kagome is. *wines* come on! Let us in on some more info about the past. Have kagome "remeber" something! Gr. Plz??!! anything?? *puppy eyes* and update sooner, as its driving me insane with being left in the dark.

I think kagome should have muttered under her breath about "sit" ting him. hehe. just cause I'm sharing her frustration.
person Forgotten Echos
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, another great chapter! I wanted it to last longer lol. I never want it to end. :) I am slightly impatient for Sesshomaru to stop bullshiting around and let Kagome know what's really going on, but I understand that it is his annoying and stubborn personality, so even though it makes me go grrrr, I gotta be patient. You are an amazing author. I was getting crazed in waiting for this chapter. I would go and check it everyday. I jumped up and down and told my hubby when I saw you had chapter 8 up. lol He said I was crazy, and then he left me alone to read it. Loved it! I eagerly await your next chapter!
person Forgotten Echos
schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about not reviewing as soon as I usually do. College is hectic. My neice is having her baby girl on the 5th. Which is just in a few more days. This is her second kid as well. Her first was a boy. I am pregnant again as well, but I am not due until April 12th. I had a girl the first time, but I don't know what I am having this time yet. BTW if you want a friend or another beta use my email and contact me on yahoo msgr. I love reading your story. It is so well thought out, and well written. I get on here every day hoping it will show that you've updated. You have an amazing talent, and I can't wait until you get into the really mushy stuff. I can't wait until Sesshomaru brings out her hands of power. My question is, is it going to be like her dad, or really cool like mom and grandma? Personally I hope the latter. Well I am looking forward to the next chapter. I love that you make them long because I don't want it to end lol.
person Neo-crystal
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Well now. Isn't that interesting? Now we know some back story & what happened with Inuyasha. I like the fact that u update fairly quickly, especially since this is such a unique & intresting story!!