rate_review Reviews

Haha you succeeded. This is a very good Nar/Kag fic. And I should know, I'm super picky about what I read. Keep up the awesome work

I really liked the way you kept them close to what they would be like if that actually happened that way to them. Most stories don't portray him correctly when they make him the romantic lead. It's ok to deviate some from the OC because time and circumstances will change anyone. Some writers make him and Sesshoumaru go completely soft and mushy practically overnight. That's straying a bit too far. I'm glad to see that you recognize they're both emotional characters but they are in control of those emotions (most of the time). I'm so glad you're back and please don't make me panic anymore like I did when you and your stories disappeared.