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for A Spider's Embrace

by QueenCeaona

schedule October 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This is definitely one of my favorites. Thanks for the story.

schedule February 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Beautifully written! And very much in character. 

person Trinabear
schedule April 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was just wondering....... What happened to Sessy? If Naroku killed Inuyasha and took the completed jewel, wouldn't Sessy want some type of revenge, considering that he has stated that Inuyasha's life was only his to take? Just asking, since I know that the story is only a one-shot mainly about Naroku only and that Sessy does not really seem to care about Inuyasha's pack at all, much less trying to um, "rescue" Kagome. After all, what would be the point when she is only an untrained human miko thar showed too much disrespect to him anyway? In any case, I really enjoyed the story. I wonder though, what, if any, children Naroku and Kagome had, would be like?
person LibraCourt
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I agree it is hard to find a good Naraku/Kagome story out there. I think you did pretty good. You should try and write a full chapter story of the two cause I would totally read it.
person Duchess of Darkness
schedule October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adored this story. The best I have read. So heartbreaking that it's so short though. Your right there wasn't slot of good ones until I happened upon yours. Dark. Sensual. Delicious... loved every word you pit together to make such a dark masterpiece. Thank you for righting this. It made my night to read such a treat.
person Ceridwyn
schedule March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Neat, I liked it. Good job.
person Kitten
schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved the ending. You should flesh this one out more.
person Sesshy's Koi
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, I've only rarely read a few Nar/Kag fics here and there, mainly because they're all so far off reality it's just pathetic, but I really have to give you some kudos on this one. I won't even say it was the best attempt, because it wasn't, it was the best actual fic I have read for this pairing, and the first I've ever enjoyed =] Honestly, I have to say I enjoyed this as much as I would have enjoyed a Sess/Kag, or and Inu/Kag, it was that great. Thank you tons for sharing. If you ever decide to try this pairing out again, I think you would do a marvelous job, and I'd love to read it.

person Kasutaishi
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I came up with a similar situation in an original I was working on once, and your work here with Naraku and Kagome definitely hits all the right notes. I love this pairing, and I love what you did with it. I am bookmarking it so I can come back and read it again!
person Anon
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing, absolutely amazing