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for Legacy of Loss

by FluffyGreenDryad

person dd
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story please continue. The picture you paint of the indignant, twitching mokomoko is hilarious! This is a very unique way to bring the brothers together I must say, very creative and done well.
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So did mokomoko lash our cause of what Miroku did earlier, or because the monk touched Inuyasha on the thigh??? :) You do like Jaken dont you.. lol I wrote the Kappa out of my story as fast as I could. You character profiling of Inuyasha is excellent by the way, his internal thoughts I find most interesting.
One thing though Rin seems too talkative/knowledgable. I cant imagine Sesshy telling anyone what he thought of Inuyasha or that he was gonna check on him. She acts like a kid in some moments and then acts like she is in her 20s when she is talking to Inuyasha. and her knowledge would be like salt in the Pup's wound. Anywa that is just my thoughts.
One last thing, I got this alot (earlier) but you seem to have escaped we cant have that... SESSY!!! WANT SESSY waaaa... :) ok got that out of my system. couldnt resist. And Im glad you like Sacred trees. Thanks
person KIKI441
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that miroku is a pervert in every aspect of the
word. i was suprised mokomoko didn't try to kill
miroku when he was using it to get laid.

and i often wondered myself why kikyou continued
to hate inuyasha when she knew he did not kill
her. her anger should have left when she found
out he did not kill her. but instead she still
wants to drag him to hell.

and shouldn't kagome remove that necklace from
inuyasha's neck. i'm pretty sure the demons
in the palace will know what it is and what
it does. won't it cause even more problems
if they were to find out that their next
intended lord is being controlled by a
human. i think you should let her remove
it. i mean i'm sure inuyasha will be
having enough problems without the fact
that he is being control by a human to
add fuel to the fire.

and when will you let us meet the demon
that actually were able to kill sesshomaru.
as unlikely as that seem it still shocks
the senses. but how poor inuyasha is
suffering because he misses his big
brother.
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:) I love it! Sesshoumaru/Inuyasha rules! hehe. I love the angst, and I give it a plus that it's going to be a happy ending. I'm a sap when it comes to that...a good cry then a smile to end the day. :) Love Inuyasha in this story and I can't wait to read about Sesshoumaru.
person zc701011
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Me likes.. good story.. hmm what is it about Mokomoko - something there huh? Poor Inuyahsa...
person KIKI441
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i just finished reading all three chapters and it was
amazing. i was in tears with inuyasha as he wept for
the death of his hated brother. two things i want to
know. 1) who is this demoness that was strong enough
to take out sesshomaru. and 2) is sesshomaru really
dead? his mokomoko is acting really weird. i have
a strange thought. is sesshomaru soul somehow inside
his mokomoko? that would be hilarious if that is
where he is.

i can't wait until the next update. i hope
sesshomaru isn't dead.
person nchsmi
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, I guess that Mokomoko has accepted InuYasha as his new owner. Poor InuYasha, he's really reeling from all this. Now, he has to deal with claiming his rights as lord, if he wants it. He should go for it!

I'm still not sure how this will be a yaoi or Inu/Sess relationship story. But, I'm enjoying it very much!

B reading U!
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*wails* Yeah, just as sad and painful as the first chapter T_T But sooo good! I look forward to more! Great job!!


-DM
person aleabeth
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“My Lord Sesshoumaru never hides. He is dead.”
o_O

Okay, you have me curious, especially since your warnings included "incest"