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Wow. This story is amazing. Not only is it something that I haven't seen before, but you've also kept the characters splendidly in character. Superb writing. I'm so sad that this story will most likely never be completed. I hope you do come back and finish it though, because I think it's something really special. I'm so curious to know what the deal is with mokomoko. Is there something of sesshomaru in it? After all, it seems as if it listens, and I swear that it was what killed the villagers who were talking bad about Inuyasha. Did you plan for Sesshomaru to make a comeback, with full knowledge of what went on during his absence due to his mokomoko? Also, how will Inuyasha handle all these responsibilities thrust upon him? (The way you've written him makes me feel so proud of him by the way. He's maturing so much!) agh. So many questions. Ah, well, I hope you won't mind if I imagine a happy ending in my head, full of yaoi goodness. Thanks for the hard work you've obviously put into this story! Laters, C.

Please come back to us. I love your work, and hate to see your stories die like this. :(

i am loving this story. update soon.

about #7...

Okay, first of all, let me say I avoided this story like
the plague, reading a deathfic regarding Inuyasha or
Sesshomaru, NOT on your life.

But, I was bored..and no one else has updated lately.

Sooo...I went against my judgment and took a peek
inside and found myself enjoying the damn thing.

I don't whether to sympathize with Inuyasha or start
laughing at the brutal treatment of poor Mokomokosama!

I can just SEE Lord Sesshomaru looking at his fur pelt in
horror! :-D

...and that's another thing, I am SO glad you acknowledged
Sesshomaru's fur pelt as a FUR PELT and not a tail! Because
I have never understood people's thinking on that subject.

Yes..yes, I know the fur pelt becomes a part of him when he
changes to dog demon form, BUT so does his clothes.

Anyway, keep up the good work.

PS-Inuyasha handled himself wonderfully in front of those youkai,
it's a shame so many left though, but...c'est la vie. I just hope
he can handle what is to come.

Please update. I would really like to read how the story will end.

A very interesting and unique story so far, I look forward to more!!!

I love it! I really hope you update soon =]

Such a great story. I love it it's both sad and funny at the same time

...ohoh...can't resist, and this will be the worst, silliest review ever but... "virile". XDDDD And Inuyasha's reaction... ah! I'm super curious to know more about the fluff and what the healer has to say! Still loving that scene with the concubines? Whores? Iono, but I really did like how they were respected and taken care of, etc. That was a great twist to some fics that have mention of such a position but with less "honor" involved, I suppose.

Great job! ..."virile" *snickers* ahaha, loved it! X*D



-DM

Thank you for updating! This was a marvellous chapter that was slightly sad in parts, but mostly so funny that I chuckled out loud several times while reading it (and I'm at work!!). "Strawberry Sesshomaru", the "dumpling fucker" and discussing Sesshomaru's virility and sexual practices in public, the mind-reading monkey, and Inuyasha thinking about how he wouldn't mind boinking his brother if it would mean being treated better... all that and more is just priceless! :)