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for The Departed

by ryotgurl19

person Krimson Kitsune
schedule December 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Yes it's good.  Where's the rest?  Please update.

schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked the second chapter. It filled in allot of gaps!
I'm so happy Kagome wasn't raped. I was sitting on the
edge of my seat. I can't wait to see what Sesshomaru does.
How long was she locked up and how did the panthers get her?
I'm super curious! I mean a human can only live for two more
weeks without food and water. Huh. Well, I look forward to your
next chapter! Good luck!
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow those two chapters were incrediable! Very great idea I can't wait for more so please update as soon as possible!
person lukymiko
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I'd like to see where you plan to go with this.
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW I love your story. I'm hoping she is going to be alright. Hoping for move please keep up the great work.
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Intersting beginning. I think you have a few holes to
clear up. I just don't quite understand what's happening
to Kagome. She just vanishes without a trace and is in
hell (or something like it)? The group seems to be aging
so she must be missing for sometime. I'm just little
puzzled.... I hope you continue forward for some answers!
(And, I love long chapters! Hint, hint.) Good luck!
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I would love to see where it is going. You have done a great job at getting your readers in to the story. When I got the end I was like "no there has to be more" Please keep up the great work.

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