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I'm so glad I found this story!!!!!!!!!!! It's really great! :) Poor Sesshomaru and you picking on him. It's all good though. I glad Kouga and Yuu may be getting together. I'm just curious about how Yuu is going to go about seducing Kouga. I WANT BOY PUPPIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) great job and can't wait for more! Sorry that your vacation sucked hope you have a great holiday!

Glad your feeling better... as always I look forward to what you come up with. I would like to see three pups at least one girl. Even have the oldest give a little grumble, growl, or puppy yip to sessy for their first face to face meeting.

May you have a health and happy holiday.

Sess fainting was cute. The story is good other than the fallacy of all yaoi writers: make everyone secretly gay. Seriously, what is up with that? It's like some kind of disease with the way it gets around. You can't just have the main characters gay, you have to make everyone gay too. I have nothing against it, one of my best friends is gay, but it's just not logical to have everyone the same way. Good to see a new chapter, but when the bad guy was thinking about invasion, there was a word that seemed out of place. You should fix that. Looking foward to more.

ROFL Sesshoumaru fainted and Inuyasha is taking pictures. That's hilarious.

Thanks for explaining the change in Inuyasha's behavior. Agoya's (sp?) description was excellent. Cuteness. He's wrapped around Inuyasha's little finger. Hahah. That was great.

It was neat that Inuyasha's put Kouga's kids up to convincing Yuusha to seduce Kouga. It'll be interesting to see how that goes.

It has been a long while since your last post. I hope you are well. ^_^

there's lots more to read (i'm on chap 6), but i wanted to say, i love all the dots you're connecting! plus, i'm a sucker for poor, lonely, companionless inuyasha. :) hope he gets some soon (sex, love, happiness, and the whole shebang).
great reading! thanks!!! 8)

I dunno...this is the second fic I've read of yours that put a thin dressing on a rape scene and it wasn't any more convincing than the first one. I think mainly because you require Inuyasha tied down, and instead of fighting or arguing it's always these token 'no please no' and he is portrayed as a weak whining shade of previous characterization. And that just makes it feel all the more contrived.

Eh...just my opinion. The story was super good up until this scene though!

~regan

My gooodness I want mooooooore darn it I loooooove this please update this I soooo in love with your style of writing.....please hurry and update kouga need love and kids

Ouch. A very good solution to the mpreg problem, nicely done. Poor Sesshoumaru's going to pass out isn't he?

Ah, man. You just had to make it a harrowing experience. This is gonna suck, but I'm happy that the pregnancy has gone well for Inu and that there hasn't been any battles in the meantime.

I am sooo diggin this story Inu preggy kawaii, dionne hey maybe found him a chick with Sesshoumaru lil girl love it and what I reeeeallly like is kouga and his fella they would look great with I(grin)I don't know a little one of there own maybe a little girl(just sayin just think about it lol )...(I'm just squealing as I write this) and thanks for taking your reader into account on somethings in your story we all say thank you for that and pllllease pleaseee keep up with the great story....