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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi you are getting real good at making me cry ya know. This chapter was how do I say it just plain beautiful. Especially the end where they were acknowledging all of their children that was so amazing and so Inuyasha thank you so much for such a wonderful chapter and story and I look forward to more updates on it. Not much more I can say except wow and maybe could use another lemon with Sesshaumaru and Inuyasha (hint hint) but I'm not pushing just a little overwhelmed with the loveliness of this chapter.
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December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!!!!!!!!!! Baby boys!!!! I'm so excited. It's great. Unforunately, I don't know japanese, but I like the name suggestions. I'm interested in seeing everyone's reactions and how protective of parents both Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are. great job and thanks for updating so soon! :)
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December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! PLease don't take too long to update I wanna see the pups more. ^_^
And as for names, I am partial to Kinkou, myself (as you can see lol ). It means balance or harmony in nature.
And as for names, I am partial to Kinkou, myself (as you can see lol ). It means balance or harmony in nature.
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December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a perfectly wonderful christmas present. he had three
boys. that's excellent. i mean sesshomaru already have so
many girls. it's time to fill the place up with boys. and
it was rather disappointing that not one of the boys had
inuyasha's ears.
boys. that's excellent. i mean sesshomaru already have so
many girls. it's time to fill the place up with boys. and
it was rather disappointing that not one of the boys had
inuyasha's ears.
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December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice scene. Sess wants a baby with puppy ears, that's so cute. Very few people have babies feeding on blood. Most of those are vampire-babies. Or Inuyasha somehow manages to produce milk. Nice change.
You are confusing BREATH with BREATHE!! Those are two different tenses of the same word. Please look up the meanings. My biggest gripe that is rife in this fic is your confusion of 'YOUKAI' and 'YOUKI' Youkai is the SPECIES, Youki is the ENERGY!! Please stop mixing that up!
You are confusing BREATH with BREATHE!! Those are two different tenses of the same word. Please look up the meanings. My biggest gripe that is rife in this fic is your confusion of 'YOUKAI' and 'YOUKI' Youkai is the SPECIES, Youki is the ENERGY!! Please stop mixing that up!
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December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay! the puppies were born. as for the name translations, I just know some of the words. I believe silver is gin and shadow is kage. as for moon, the kanji character for it can be read as tsuki, getsu, or gatsu. in deathnote the name raito is written with the character for moon, so i think that could be a more unusual reading for that kanji. anyways, good luck with naming them. hope this review sort of helps. thanks for the update. can't wait for more.
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December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was really hoping that one would be girl, but it's ok. I was thinking of Shadow Moon. I don't know why or what this name means, but it kind of reminds you of Inuyasha's human night or that there is a hidden side of Inuyasha that no one knew about until much later. It could also mean that it is possible for him to be quiet, still and almost hidden form sight at times, but when provoked he's almost an unstoppable force (I got that from the battle with the monkey).
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December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another great one. the names a little harder to do. good luck to u. up date soon.
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December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I do like this story a whole lot and the birth was well interesting to say the least but also a little gruesome and slightly well freaky but interesting at least and that's what I like best also the fact you didn't turn Inuyasha into a girl god I hate it when they turn the character into a girl I mean then it's not really an Mpreg now is it just a boring normal one. I mean well what ever I won't get into pet peeves but thank you thank you thank you and I can't wait to see what happens next so I'll be anticipating.
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December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Twenty! jk. That would be cruel. *rolls two dice* ...and i got a 4 and a 2, 4 boys and 2 girls, lol. Still too mean. Ah well. Poor Sesshoumaru. On another note, I hope your holiday was good :) and welcome back.