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for The Sacred Trees

by ajj77sunhawk

person nchsmi
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The story has a lot of depth, and I like the dramatic edge in it. Keep up the awesome work! But, just one thing. Will this be a constant back and forth between the ages? Another thing, I that Sesshomaru can't talk to ordinary trees. But, he CAN talk to that 1000 yr old magnolia tree, Bokusono (sp?). The tree that was an advisior of his father's. Couldn't the tree be able to tell Sess something useful. Like if u want to feel your brother's spirit, go to the goshinboku (SP?) He should b able 2 feel InuYasha, wouldn'd he?

Great so far...
B reading U!
person KIKI441
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
why was sesshomaru's bond broken off with inuyasha? did it
have something to do with the power of the well? or was it
because he was in a coma like state from the poison? will we
find out in the next chapter what the four strangers expect
from inuyasha?
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that intersting. I'm glad that Kagome will no longer try to be his mate and the fact that she has been abusing Inuyasha has arisen. please update I want to know more on whats to happen with Inuyasha and his training and whats going to happen with Sesshomaru I would like to see if he goes through any changes. not that his only family is gone.
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome. I always wondered why so few ever mentioned how Inuyasha seemed tied to trees. I mean one translation of his name of 'Dog spirit of the woods'. I really liked the fact that Sess heard his howl but didn't know what it was when he was small, and how he chose to ignore rather than take the time to think. had he I wonder if he would have gone to his brother? I especially like how he was enraged at the loss of inuyasha...somebody has issues... Please continue...
EG
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! Yes, please continue!!!!
person kmoaton
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How interesting! Can't wait to read more.
person Vyper
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I hope to hear more.
person KIKI441
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes! yes! of course you should continue. i want to know
what will happen to inuyasha. and will the tree talk
to sesshomaru once he gets there and tell him what
happened to his brother? or what is expected of him? and
i also would like to know what happened to the demon
race. it does seem rather strange that they would
die out in a few hundred years considering they were
so powerful and they lived way longer than humans. i
am looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes you should continue because I would like to know why was Sesshoumaru not asked the same thing if he could feel a part of himself being lost in time. With him being the only blood relative what happens to their family line now? What will Sess do now? Will he be able to find Inuyasha again? Why can't Inu ever catch a break?
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please contuine the story!! it is so sad!!