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August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh yes, i just loved inuyasha's revenge. you know it would
have been even funny also to be there to see sesshomaru's expression as he
woke up to his fluff being burned around him. a wet burned dog. i don't
blame shippo for laughing. you know how wet dog smell. it is not a nice
smell. so, matina and dionne has come to the rescue. dionne and matina are they
only there to see what the youkai will do now that they know of the
power inuyasha possess. i remember the ancient one saying that if the youkai
in japan make the wrong decision they would have inuyasha removed from
japan. will they wait to see what sesshomaru and the others will do first
before the finally decision is made?
this chapter was so much fun to read. i'm sure you had a ball writing it. i am
so looking forward to the next chapter. i know i'll have to waiting i just hope
i have fingernails by the time you put up the next chapter.
have been even funny also to be there to see sesshomaru's expression as he
woke up to his fluff being burned around him. a wet burned dog. i don't
blame shippo for laughing. you know how wet dog smell. it is not a nice
smell. so, matina and dionne has come to the rescue. dionne and matina are they
only there to see what the youkai will do now that they know of the
power inuyasha possess. i remember the ancient one saying that if the youkai
in japan make the wrong decision they would have inuyasha removed from
japan. will they wait to see what sesshomaru and the others will do first
before the finally decision is made?
this chapter was so much fun to read. i'm sure you had a ball writing it. i am
so looking forward to the next chapter. i know i'll have to waiting i just hope
i have fingernails by the time you put up the next chapter.
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I haven't seen this story before. Characterization seems spot on. Narration is more even in the later chapters. Your editing seems to be improving too. Codes are a pain.
Inuyasha's childhood has prepared him for this life of solitude and service, but now he has a choice. A life with his family and friends or fulfill a duty only he has the ability to complete? I freaking love chapter nine! The last page was perfection!
Inuyasha's childhood has prepared him for this life of solitude and service, but now he has a choice. A life with his family and friends or fulfill a duty only he has the ability to complete? I freaking love chapter nine! The last page was perfection!
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August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am truly loving your story. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. You are a really gifted writer, keep it up.
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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love you!! This story just keeps getting better and better!!! But...you just can't let Sessh get preg...even if it's their second litter...I mean...he's the strongest and if he can't protect them in his weakened cond who will??? But it was totally cute for him to offer I think!!! If only men now adays could take take that burden some times XD would make things a lot easier!!!
Keep up the awesome work and hope to hear more soon.
Keep up the awesome work and hope to hear more soon.
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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great lemon for the first encounter. Very realistic between the two Inu's.
Sesshomarus' honesty will definitly win brownie points with Inuyasha, and
as for the younger Inu's mind catching up to his body....time, time, time.
Sesshomarus' honesty will definitly win brownie points with Inuyasha, and
as for the younger Inu's mind catching up to his body....time, time, time.
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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOODNESS!! Such hotness! It fitted with the story but I'm interested in seeing the struggle ahead too. At least you didn't have it where Inuyasha was going to be immediately ok with their mating and everything. This is such an interesting story!!! Keep it up!
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES! Definitelly a lemon! XD Great work untill now. :) I'll be waiting for more. :)
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am so loving this! It was so sad to hear what happened with everyone but it made the story really interesting. It would be nice to know why there were impersonators out there or did I miss that part?
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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! What a fantastic story! Very original! The cliffhangers SUCK! LOL! ~waiting anxiously for the next installment~
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story immensely, waiting with baited breath. So, he healed
one of the sacred trees that called to him regardless of the audience. Hmm, good
dvelopment I anticipate the next chapter.
one of the sacred trees that called to him regardless of the audience. Hmm, good
dvelopment I anticipate the next chapter.