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for The Sacred Trees

by ajj77sunhawk

schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Plese finish this story its kickin and please don't leave your readers wondering promise us you'll finish this story. Cause I can't deal with a unfinished story especially when its soooooo damn gooooood....oh and have a epiology with it yeah yeah I know u don't know me from spit but please have a goooooood ending not just for yasha and shessy but for kouga and shippo too "Pleeeease......thank you soooo much and please keep up the great fic and those fic to come.
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story. I can't wait to find out who the traitor is.
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi I'm a new reader.Haha is that even a question?Continue with the smut of course!Hehehehe.Please?That last scene was so hot,and Inuyasha should be taken by Sesshoumaru fully,not just when he is hanyou.=D Thanks so much for writing this fic,it caught my eye and after reading it I was hooked.I've never read any other Inuyasha fic with such a plot,and its really well thought out and written.Inuyasha is so worshipped in this fic,lol,I love how that provokes Sesshy's dominating nature and all the sexual tension between them.Please update soon,I can't wait to read the following parts.Btw don't be misleaded by my email add,it doesn't mean I like her,I was obsessed with Inuyasha when I set up my email acc and just thought of using her name cos she's the main female chara and I wanted my email add to relate to the manga.I have the same opinion as you about the way she treats Inuyasha and I always thought that Inuyasha should just ditch Kikyo and Kagome.XP
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh love this story please keep going with the night before with Inuyasha and sesshomaru. It's always lovely to read Inuyasha having pleasure, besides I kinda want to know if he will return the favor for Sesshomaru. And the Kouga scene is great I was going to ask if you could do something like that for him give him at part to cleans himself and have sometime with Inuyasha..
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15 of Sacred Trees is building towards a novel size, I hope, epic. To answer the question you posed at the end of the chapter:

1. Lord Tatsukiinoue (Demon Dragon) - Too obvious since his clan manufactures equipment including weapons.

2. Lord Akaishiimaru (Serow Demon) - Again too obvious a choice since the markings lead in this direction.

3. Lord Kira Iemura (Monkey Demon) - Not the obvious choice but techie enough to purchase a trap magicly enhanced by Lord Akaishiimaru's clan and manufactured by Lord Tatsukiinoue's clan. Why? why does any creature that "thinks" do terrible things to others... power, control, dominance. Tired of being in Fluffy-Chan's shadow.

Shippo is old enough to get involved with someone maybe Dionne (ha, ha). Unrequited love for InuYash and Dionne slowly falls for Shippo who has some of the traits that his father instilled in him during his puppy hood years.

Ultimately, it's your choice and I look forward to what you come up with... I'll be sitting on pin's and needle's waiting for the next chapter in this wonderful story.

Thank you.
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really love our story.
the idea of the ancient ones is very original (as far as i know, but believe me, i've read a lot of story's;)
and with the healing of that tree-spirit-thingy-who's-name-i-always-forget, the canines have also human groups né?
if demons aren't allowed to watch, then maybe they can help?
hmm, i'm really curious about the next chapter (smile:)
keep going!
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love this story this is so great love the chapter please update soon. will Inuyasha gain his freedom or will Sesshomaru be able to help? OH I can't wait poor fluffy he really had a ruff night lol.
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story... you just have a few words here and there that are misspelled but over all the storyline and characters have an outstanding flow to them and could have been written by Rumiko Takahashi herself. I look forward to what comes next. Here's hoping that the fates are kind and your inspiration continues.
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay!? I wrote an awesome review and AFF froze. Lets see if I can remeber what I wrote...
Perfect! I loved Inu's escape and how he got even with Sess (poor moko-moko) I think Inu just won the respect of every canine that fought or saw him fight others and the stand still with Sess. I think Sess got his point across with his trick. He knew his brother couldn't kill him, and by forcing the trigger to go off proved that he was never letting Inu go. But I have to wonder how he will deal with the new canines, who are not under his control, very strong and loyal to Inu...
Sweet - had to review now as FF.net is probally down for a bit...
EG
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wrote a review, but I don't know what happened. I'm hoping that the ancient ones let Inuyasha stay with Sesshoumaru as he can help protect him after he wakes more of them and from the one they don't know is after him. Plus that is the one thing that they can't give him: the love of a family.