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one more thing. since the betrayal couldn't have simply been
done alone without his family or the others knowing. will sesshomaru put out the order to kill
all the monkey demons?

Nice work with the battle scene. I do like how you used his blood as his main weapon, it does make sense and I'd considered it. since his father gave each son a fang and later Sesshoumaru grew a sword with his regenerated arm. it does make sense Inuyasha would use his blood, the thing that has made him strong and the thing that he has been prosecuted for, as his greatest weapon.

Yet another awesome chapter. I did like how you showed us Inuyasha relying on his own strength and just not the weapon. Once again everyone has underestimated our favorite hanyou! This was enjoyable and the fight scene was outstanding! Sorry I haven't review in a while but believe me, I've been keeping up and I can't wait until the next installment!!

Chapter 20 fantastic Inuyash still caused some dropped jaws and I love that you used his blades of blood fighting abilities and showed us where his strength lay. It's either an half demon whose the master mind or several generations of human military bent on wiping out demons by turning them against themselves then do away with the remaining "chosen" ones.

Darn those cheeky monkeys!!!! How did they get through the shield?

FAN-FREAKIN-TABULOUS!!!!
LOOOOOOVE THIS FIC!!

Ok more more u to torture us don't ya this is gettin good write come on..........

Once again your story line kept me spellbound and entertained. I fully appreciated the interweaving of real history with the history of your story. The limes and lemons were delicious and could even be considered in character for InuYasha and Sesshomaru's temperaments. I'm still trying to figure out who the foreign enemy might be but look forward to what you creative mind comes up with for the following chapters. I look forward to InuYasha demonstrating why he's more than a match for Sesshoaru on some deadly assassin's... it's going to be an eye opener for the Lord's (& Ladies) of the council. They either don't know or keep forgetting that he is very capable and can hold his own against the bad "guys".

Good luck and thank you.

Interesting deductions. I think it did get a little drawn out, but it also worked to introduce the council, which I am assuming will play some roles in the future. I happen to like the interactions between Sess and Dione. They are like two dogs fighting over a proverbial bone (inu) and I think its good for Sess to have someone who is not afraid of him who will remind him he could have lost inu.
I really loved how you brought that little filler character in (he was so cute) and I love how Inu still calls him sempai even though he is older. I like how Inu is so calm and didn't get mad at all during the meeting. just goes to show that he just needed family and feelings of safety to grow up. Canada did him well.

I really love how Kouga, Shipo and Dione are so protective, and how Inu finds it amusing. I mean hell, we all know he can stand toe to toe with Sess, they are all just so afraid to loose him that they have become overly protective. I wonder why Inu hasn't remind everyone that he once took Sesss's arm when he was in Dog form. Personally I always wondered why Inu didn;t keep the arm, than when his big brother acted like an ass he could make him hit himself...

EG

i had guessed between the two dragons but since one wasn't really a dragon. i thought
it was the other but i never even guessed at the monkey. now that they have the
traitor and i am very positive that those dogs are going to tear those monkeys a
new hole so it's safe to say they are dead. now the real problem begins, who is the
master mind behind all this? and will sesshomaru order the death of the entire
monkey clan and take their lands and stuff to divide among himself and the other
council members. they will have to order ever monkey killed because they can't
afford to have any more threats. so will the Shogun give out the order. complete
extinction of the monkey clan.