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I read this whole story and I love it. Just thought I would let ya know. I will be reading your other ones too.

I wanted to read the whole story before I reviewed; believe it or not, I read the whole story in one day! (Talk about overload!!)

Very enjoyable tale. I'm a little wary of this "healing" business, but you got Sesshomaru exactly right. Wonderful cliff-hangers, great touches of humor, well-done (and not overdone) angst.

I will definitely be looking for more of your work in the future. Thank you for the trip.

Yay! I love teh pregnant version of Sesshie. He's just how I'd see him in that state. SOOO HILARIOUS!!!! Thank you for adding such a beautiful final chapter to an equally stunning and wonderul story. I've added this to my favorites, if you don't mind, to read and re-read over and over again. Thank you again.

That was wonderful and I was crying by the end. Can't blame anyone for them being upset with Inuyasha after the war and his death I would have hit him in the back of the head myself and then the explanation beautiful only natual they would all glomp on him then. And Sesshoumaru pregnant actually I can't ever imagine it even when I read it it's just so unlikely but how his attitude was now that I can believe he could never give up enough control for a pregnancy let alone a birth. It would make sense that Inuyasha or his pups are the only thing he would stand around him mainly because unconsciencely he would know that Inuyasha would never put up with it pregnant or not loved how you did it though. The bit with Kouga and Yuusha well it was a really nice closure on them in the story and the bit with the marriages very cool. The ending was the best though how the ancients look after their sweet one to make sure that he would always recover I really loved that this story was so beautiful and wonderful and I thank you for giving it to us. It would have made a hell of a great movie alas it will have to be in our imaginations for that I guess. You do have a great style and I can't wait till you update strength. Thank you again and continue writing talent like yours isn't given to just anyone ya know some of us rely on it.

I'm sorry to see it end, but I enjoyed the ride. The only thing that was a little off for me was Inuyasha's explanation of his death. I don't know what it was, but it was a little off to me. Maybe something like he could see or feel through the ancients despair, sadness, lose and anger not only for himself and trees, but for all youkai should the baron succeed. The Ancients took a chance on dying out by giving back what they had taken graciously so that there might be a chance for others to survive should Inuyasha live again. I guess I wanted it to sond as if they didn't know if what they were going to do would work, but it would be worth it to show how much they cared for him as a person and not as a tool for their personal use. Also it was their contribution to the war. Does that make sense or have I gone off the deep end?

Sesshoumaru pregnant. LMAO! I loved it! THANK YOU!!!

ROFLMAO!! Is InuYasha just clueless, does he have a death wish or can he just not help irritating Sesshomaru! No need to wait on pups, He can fight and heal Ancient Ones and birth pups all with no sweat ,no Problem!0_0 I agree with Shippo, it's a very good thing indeed that Sesshy already had white hair. Oh, and the trophy, too funny and sooo appropriate! I am loving this story. I just found it today and have been reading non-stop. Great characterizations, very descripive, intriguing and well-developed plot. Now on to read the rest.

Excellent Story!

Loved everything about it, but just as a small note, I would suggest that you revise the chapters and fix the errors that were around and made the story sometimes a bit confusing. In anything else it shines as a wonderful tale! An epilogue would definitely would make the story feel complete, as it seems like it ended suddenly and the characters need the closing of knowing whether Sesshomaru ever got pregnant with Inuyasha's pups, if everyone found a suitable mate, how the magic was restored to the rest of the world, and if Inuyasha ever went back to Canada to visit the sacred trees there.

Congratulations on a wonderfully done story! I look forward to more from you!

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Midnight Cat

Just a quick note - this deserves a WAY longer review, but suffice it to say that I loved it, the battle scenes were great (the Baron was SO outmatched by our calm Sesshy, heheheh, and I loved the enraged Shippo destroying the enemy in all his 5 tail glory) but my two favorites: Inu cheerfully breaking the Golden Band, and Sess pointing out that the Baron was already dead.

And hell yes I want an Epilogue, because I think that Sesshy is already carrying the next set of children!!!! Little girls with Inu's ears, so we can all SQUEEE.

OMG!!!! This is a really good story. You can't just end it here...you need an epilogue. It needs one more chaper than an epilogue. But you can't just end it like that...lol