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for Just a Brief Moment

by LunarEclipse

person madmiko
schedule July 17, 2019 at 12:00 AM

This second chapter is brilliant.  It' is breathtaking and heartbreaking at the same time.  I love the way you wrote it from Kagome's perspective and then from Sasuke's so we see the whole picture.  It makes me long for a longer story and a happy resolution, but truthfully, I know it's perfect just the way it is.

person azngirl
schedule July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sasugome~
=)
PLZ UPDATE~
schedule July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First chapter was great. Second chapter left me wanting to cry. It's so sad!! I like it, but I want to cry for them.