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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
o...m...g...
this was...
*sighs* soso hot.
liked the ending; it was funny.
and hot.
man, now i'm a HORNY fangirl...
oh, Bobby! lol.
this was...
*sighs* soso hot.
liked the ending; it was funny.
and hot.
man, now i'm a HORNY fangirl...
oh, Bobby! lol.
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, dear sweet mother of God! Hot! Hot! So hot, it's got a half-life! You've got a few grammar goofs and run-on sentences here and there, but your imagination, description, and vocabulary really make it work. Continue to improve, and you will put the "adult" back in AFF. Thank you!