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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so here i am, 5:04am EST, just finishing your collected works titled "Desperation" and i smile, laughing to myself as i do what i promised myself not to do, staying up all night reading...
i smile fore i know that i will remember what i have read here, and the collection of words you have gathered together, it fills me with warmth knowing that others will read this, and feel as i do.
but i do weep, i weep because there is not enough, not enough to quench my thirst, i hunger for more of this story as i hunger for life, i indeed will be watching you, and i hope to hear word of more.
in my final thoughts it strikes me, the lack of writing of this quality, this magnitude; on this aptly named adultfanfiction site pains me, a story not of debauchery, but of love... pain, of blood and steel. you give me hope, and i hope for more.
[ps: not enough hugs in this world so i thank you][modified for typo's >.>]
i smile fore i know that i will remember what i have read here, and the collection of words you have gathered together, it fills me with warmth knowing that others will read this, and feel as i do.
but i do weep, i weep because there is not enough, not enough to quench my thirst, i hunger for more of this story as i hunger for life, i indeed will be watching you, and i hope to hear word of more.
in my final thoughts it strikes me, the lack of writing of this quality, this magnitude; on this aptly named adultfanfiction site pains me, a story not of debauchery, but of love... pain, of blood and steel. you give me hope, and i hope for more.
[ps: not enough hugs in this world so i thank you][modified for typo's >.>]
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter!
I could feel the emotions as I read the chapters as though they were my own. You have a very talented gift, and I still can't wait to read your original story. I'm certain that it will be just as well written, thought provoking, and it will pull on the emotions as this story has been able to do.
As I said, you have a wonderful gift. I am honored that you have shared this story with everyone here, and that I have had the pleasure of reading what you have posted so far.
Until we meet again.
I could feel the emotions as I read the chapters as though they were my own. You have a very talented gift, and I still can't wait to read your original story. I'm certain that it will be just as well written, thought provoking, and it will pull on the emotions as this story has been able to do.
As I said, you have a wonderful gift. I am honored that you have shared this story with everyone here, and that I have had the pleasure of reading what you have posted so far.
Until we meet again.
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. Thank you. I look forward to continued updates. To give you an idea of just what a good story means to me, this story is the first url I put into my fiv folder once I recovered my computer. (a place of honor ~.^)
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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting story... like it so far... nice that inuyasha and kagome are going to be mates with shippo as their son... then sesshoumaru being a good big brother... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN!
I can't wait to read your own story if this is the pre-view! I can hardly wait ... but I will wait.
Until we meet again.
I can't wait to read your own story if this is the pre-view! I can hardly wait ... but I will wait.
Until we meet again.
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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the new chapter.
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August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 25 was too short! I want more! I am wondering about how Fawn got certain information. What are your plans for the rest of the story? Please post again soon. I check EVERY day (usually several times a day actually) This is one of my favorite stories.
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August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Please keep them coming. At some point, I'll have to share my writings with you. Speaking of writings, I ned to get to work on my own fanfic again soon.
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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Still one hell of a great story! I agree that you don't always need a lemon to "make" a story, and yours is perfect the way it is!
Question? The original characters of yours, are they from your book that you are writing? If you are posting chapters to your book anywhere, or have a book published, or the like, I would be VERY interested in reading it!
Keep up the fantastic work!
Until we meet again.
Question? The original characters of yours, are they from your book that you are writing? If you are posting chapters to your book anywhere, or have a book published, or the like, I would be VERY interested in reading it!
Keep up the fantastic work!
Until we meet again.
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August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the two chapters that you posted. I found them very enjoyable.
You mentioned that you are writing a novel. I would be most interested in reading it when you get published. I too am writing a novel, (just started it very reciently) and hopefully, I'll be able to have it published by one of the bigger publishers.
You mentioned that you are writing a novel. I would be most interested in reading it when you get published. I too am writing a novel, (just started it very reciently) and hopefully, I'll be able to have it published by one of the bigger publishers.