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January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Story!!!! can't wait for an update!
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November 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your story, and already I have to limit myself, or I would read the whole thing in one sitting...and while Im studying for exams and finals, that's not to good, but your story is. I use it to fill my break times between vocab, equations, and grammar practice.....your a great writer, and I am going tO love reading Desperation. Thus chapter made me cry, Inu always does when he has a real reason to show his feelings and/or weaknesses(and the author is good...author has to be good, or it sucks) especially involving Kagome and sesshomaru. And while sess seems a little OOC, I actually think if what I think has happened with him in your story, it is very appropriate and IN(U) character behaivior. (I have always taken OOC to mean out of character, but I could nevr find a place to explain all the abbreviations, so t took me months to figure even that out...) any who...oh yeah, what I originally ment to tell you, the actual reason I HAD to review... Inuyashas last line made me cry....which is a good thing, you have feeling and character in your story...keep it up!!! INUblngswitKAG
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So... first time reviewing a story (new member), so I might not be doing this right. But
I just wanted to say I love your story!!!! I've read all the current chapters in the last two days XD. Call me crazy, but its good. I enjoy the characters you made up, and the story with Shadara and her friends as well. Very original, considering its a fan fiction XD. Please keep updating!!! Could use a bit more description, a paragraph here and there, but mostly you get the point across, and the reader knows exactly what it is you want to say. Dialogue is great, and everything said really sounds like something the character would say. All in all, good job!
Oh, and about the lemons... if you're not comfortable writing them, dont lol. Some people just don't think that way, and if you don't, so what? Don't let the fact that this is an "adult" site make you feel like you have to write stuff like that. Focus on the story, and what you want to write. Don't worry about what other people want, if they want stuff like that, they can go read someones lemon-y oneshots lol. Be yourself!
I just wanted to say I love your story!!!! I've read all the current chapters in the last two days XD. Call me crazy, but its good. I enjoy the characters you made up, and the story with Shadara and her friends as well. Very original, considering its a fan fiction XD. Please keep updating!!! Could use a bit more description, a paragraph here and there, but mostly you get the point across, and the reader knows exactly what it is you want to say. Dialogue is great, and everything said really sounds like something the character would say. All in all, good job!
Oh, and about the lemons... if you're not comfortable writing them, dont lol. Some people just don't think that way, and if you don't, so what? Don't let the fact that this is an "adult" site make you feel like you have to write stuff like that. Focus on the story, and what you want to write. Don't worry about what other people want, if they want stuff like that, they can go read someones lemon-y oneshots lol. Be yourself!
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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love the story, please update soon
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December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful Chapter. Thank you.
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October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN!!!
Yasha's dad and Kikyo?! Now that's a twist I didn't see happening! Or that Shadara had a mate ... or are they really mated and she is just calling to the other half of her soal because of she is watching Kagome and Inu Yasha and the affection they freely share ... maybe that is why she is calling to her mate?!
*scratches head as eyes whirl in confusion* Way too much for my very tired brain to take in. Working nights kinda sucks becase I've been too tired to come here and FINALLY noticed that you updated! Very happy here! Now I can sleep and process what you have written as I eagerly await your next chapter!
Until we meet again.
Yasha's dad and Kikyo?! Now that's a twist I didn't see happening! Or that Shadara had a mate ... or are they really mated and she is just calling to the other half of her soal because of she is watching Kagome and Inu Yasha and the affection they freely share ... maybe that is why she is calling to her mate?!
*scratches head as eyes whirl in confusion* Way too much for my very tired brain to take in. Working nights kinda sucks becase I've been too tired to come here and FINALLY noticed that you updated! Very happy here! Now I can sleep and process what you have written as I eagerly await your next chapter!
Until we meet again.
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... So Inuyasha's Dad has a continuing role in this wonderful story. And so does Kekiyo. This does continue to draw me in more and more.
To give you an idea how much I get drawn into the story, I could actually SMELL the toasted cheese sandwiches and tomato soup. Smelled like Campbells Select to be exact. (only a cook would be able to distinguish lol)
I'll be watching for Chapter 37. and when this story is finally concluded, I shall watch for the next story.
To give you an idea how much I get drawn into the story, I could actually SMELL the toasted cheese sandwiches and tomato soup. Smelled like Campbells Select to be exact. (only a cook would be able to distinguish lol)
I'll be watching for Chapter 37. and when this story is finally concluded, I shall watch for the next story.
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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YIPPIE!! Another chapter!
Ooooo .... poisoned ... and not a very nice one either! I can fell Inu Yasha's confusion and conflicting emotions, him wanting to hold her and yet knowing that he had to let her go. And his anxiety of what was going on, her having to be chained ...
Can't wait to see what your next chapter has in store! And from Kagome's view ... I wonder if she is feeling any jealousy(sp?) over all the attention that Shandara is getting from Yasha? Hmm ...
I will check out your other stories! I didn't realize that you had others posted here!
Until we meet again.
Ooooo .... poisoned ... and not a very nice one either! I can fell Inu Yasha's confusion and conflicting emotions, him wanting to hold her and yet knowing that he had to let her go. And his anxiety of what was going on, her having to be chained ...
Can't wait to see what your next chapter has in store! And from Kagome's view ... I wonder if she is feeling any jealousy(sp?) over all the attention that Shandara is getting from Yasha? Hmm ...
I will check out your other stories! I didn't realize that you had others posted here!
Until we meet again.
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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update. It was short, but well written. I will have to check out the other story you have posted as well. I CAN'T believe that this one is almost over. It seems too quick!
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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yippie! You have returned! You have been missed.
This is yet another wonderful chapter. I completely forgot about Yasha's father "requesting" that they help the "black wolf". Looks like I am going to have to re-read your fantabulous story ... again. It will only be my third time ... *blush*
I'm glad that you are feeling better, and I hope that everything went well, considering the circumstances. My offer is still open for if you need to talk.
Until we meet again.
This is yet another wonderful chapter. I completely forgot about Yasha's father "requesting" that they help the "black wolf". Looks like I am going to have to re-read your fantabulous story ... again. It will only be my third time ... *blush*
I'm glad that you are feeling better, and I hope that everything went well, considering the circumstances. My offer is still open for if you need to talk.
Until we meet again.