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by DemonQueen17

person Trelweny
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*faceplants* Really? You left it THERE? *pouts and whimpers* And this story has such potential too. This kind of ooc is fun. I'm really, really curious what Sesshomaru's costume is. And what he dreamed that had him destroy his sheets. ^_^ Please continue writing this!
person Tori
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahhh i cant wait for u to write more. this is pretty good too. i love what u've done with the whole strip club thing. oo i'd love to see Sesshomaru get all sweaty and hot and naked while dancing. how about u? oo he is sexy no? i can understand why the place gets paid alot when he preforms. cant wait for more!!

always friendly and whacked out
Tori
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awsome story . i wanted to know if you would mind if i write a story with the same plot as your i have framed stuff already but i wanted to ask first so i dont offend anyone
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awsomw write more soon!
person AirFox17
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Can't wait to read more!
person the Ups and downs
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAZ REALLY REALLY REALLY GREAT AND FUNNY!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update as soon as possible. I can't wait to read more. It sounds so good. ^_^
person Vyper
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cute story, great idea with Sess. Silver g string, can't the man just go naked? It would save a lot of time and stress. Plus being free like the wind and all he could play helecopter while swinging everything about. Mwahahahahahahaaaaaa