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noooo WAY! WTH? I really like the Inuyasha Kagome pairing. And sesshomaru is such an ass in this one. ugh. The lemon was great though!

So far so good with this story and I am enjoying it very much. The last chapter was pretty hot too with the shower scene between Yash and Kagome. Sess was an ass and not sure he derseves Kagome but if he does find kagome at least make take a while and allow Yash and her to have some hot steamy love. Nice job looking forward to more please.

Oh my gosh! I can't believe she's pregnant! And as much as I wanted Kagome's first time to be with Sesshoumaru..that ain't gonna happen for a while it seems. And the way you wrote it, you had me feeling a teeny bit sorry for him, just a teeny tiny bit. He did bring it on himself.And I'm surprised Kagome didn't know she liked to be bitten when she was with Sesshoumaru. Makes ya wonder how much they did together in the first place. Especially with Kagome planning their anniversary to go all the way with him. Again, another amazing chapter! Can't wait to see how you play out Kagome's reaction when she finds out Rin is pregnant.

Um, I'm not saying I don't like the story and please don't take this the wrong way... but if Sesshoumaru likes Kagome so much and thinks so well of her, then why in the world did he cheat on her? I mean, it really makes no sense at all. Hopefully, you'll give us some motivation -- like why he did it. Frankly, I don't really think he deserves her. Inuyasha seems like the good guy in all this and the one she should end up with.

omg :) i love this fan fiction so far!! :D

I like it. It´s good to see that Rin is the "slut" in the story and not the usual Kagura or Kikyou, two women I really like which I can´t say about Rin. I just wish longer chapers from you and that Kagome is strong enough to face everything. I´d like to see her getting over Sesshoumaru so he has to fight harder to make her fall in love with him again. That development can take a few years so they would be more mature. Teenagers are so fickle and everything is so much worse when the hormones play crazy.

Oooh, I can't wait 'till Rin gets it. Preferably, by Kagome. But whatever rocks your creative boat. Glad you updated! Can't wait to read more and see how Sesshoumaru fixes the mess he made!! =]

Rin needs to get slapped. Bet ol' Sesshy's sorry he had anything to do with her now, huh? Sounds like Kagome and Inuyasha are having fun in Hawaii. Are you sure you won't change your mind and make this Inu/Kag? Just thought I'd ask.
But then again, it will be fun to see what hoops Sesshy boy has to go through to get Kagome back. That could be very entertaining.
Keep up the good work.

So I like the story, but I need more. Like chapters 1-3
could have been one chapter. I don't know. It's not an
insult, it's just that I want to read more! Please update
soon and add a little length. I want to know how this story
is actually going to turn up. It seems Inuyasha is just
going to get screwed over big time in this story. He's the
good guy trying to be there for Kagome, while his brother
(her ex-boyrfiend) is an asshole and wanting her back? I
just can't help but think of poor Inuyasha. Plus, won't this
just make Kagome look dumb? I mean, I would never get back
together with someone if they cheated on me....

I love Sess/Kag stories but in this one. Kagome deserves better and Rin and Sess need to rot in hell.