rate_review Reviews

I like your story! It's pretty good! I can't wait
to see how Kagome is going to fair in the fuedal
era without a body and with Sesshomaru. This story is
also orignal. Good luck with your writing!

I liked it. I thought it was very well thought-out and paced. Mmmm....Kagome unknowingly pulling at Sesshoumaru's emotions. Can't wait to read more!

You ask: Is it good? and i say...Fuck ya! Awesome job! I had no idea you were going to writie this! See, what I like about your writing is that it's so unexpected. Keep that up, because your writing will keep getting better and better if you contain your freshness. also, the idea you presented of why Sesshomaru allows Rin and Jaken to stay with him was brilliant and also very original. WTF! I had no idea Kagome was in spirit/soul form. AND she's hugging Sesshomaru? WAY into extreme intensity! I can't wait to see what happens next. also, thanx for responding to me in the begining of your chapters! I feel so honored lol. STAY GOLD!

What has Naraku done???? I had a feeling about that teacher guy, what with Kanna and all. And Sesshoumaru's there to help. I must know more!!!

oh no! is this part of the dream? Is it actually happening? You need to update soon please so I can understand this complex story! I love complexity and I really like the idea of you incorporating Naraku's image with someone in the modern Era. Update soon please!

You have caught my interest. Why did you stick an "albino child" named "Kanna" into the story? Is it supposed to be a clue as to something's wrong with Kagome's world/mind? It's really confusing, but I am hoping that as the story progresses, things will be made clear.