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Please write more?

Please update.

I really hope you keep updating this story on here(I mean 'this site'). I read one of your A.N.'s from 1 of the chapters and in it you left a message to someone (a reviewer, fan, friend or such?) & it you said that you'd be updating this story here(I can only guess that by 'here' it meant 'on this site'?) but it also said that if the person couldn't wait then they could read the story on your ff.net site (it also mentioned that the version on ff.net didn't have sex/love scenes. I wanted to check your bio page to see when you last updated this story here (on this site) but I thought it would be better to leave a review first since I'd already read 5 chapters without leaving any (reviews). From I've read so far I'm really enjoying this story.I know some readers don't like stories where Kagome is portrayed as anything other than a human/miko but I'm not 1 of them. Recently, I've find I prefer stories where Kagome is more than human....so this story makes me very happy. Since I'm much older than 18 (more than 2 x 18) I really look forward to reading the 18+ (or more mature) version of this story. I look forward to reading more of your work.

i love this story! update soon!

What is this voice in her head that is telling her what to do & say ?? When Sessh is still himself but his eyes are red, his claws/nails are longer,his (canines or fangs) teeth are longer & his voice is different.... is that his beast or inner beast ??? The voice in her head that is telling how to act & talk tells her to speak in a different language, what is the language that she is speaking that he understands (or is it his beast understands??) & doesn't he think it's weird that she is speaking it (or does he not realize she is speaking this other language )??? I am really enjoying this story & I don't mean to be unkind in any way but the story is a little hard to understand some of the words are off,spelled wrong or out of place. I was wondering if the person who is writing this maybe speaks something other than english or is just not proofreading. It's a very interesting story & by rereading parts I'm able to make out what's going on & I will definitely continue reading this.

i cant wait 2 read more. please update soon

more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1burbehra him

This story has potential. But please please get a Beta

I do kind of like this story. You are missing a few words here and there. But this is still a really cute story so far. I look forward to reading more .

this is such a wonderful story i cant wait for more