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i do hope that you continue to update this its starting to get very good i like the somewhat crossover with yu yu hakusho

Chapter four was lovely. I must say that the
marking information was a turn of events. I can't
really wait till Sesshomaru comes into the picture.
I still wish the chapters were longer though...
-sigh- Well, keep up the story and I'll be reading!

So, he won't be able to find her unless she calls out to him. Which, of course, she would not willingly do. During the pain of birthing her pup, she might unthinkingly do such a thing. Or it could be he already knows how to find her due to the fact that Inuyasha might have told him where she lived and what year and he's keeping his distance to give her time since he knows that to her it just recently happened. However you choose for them to meet again, please don't let it be years in the future. I like reading about his feelings and reactions to a small pup.

I like this story. Usually I prefer them in the past but this one caught my interest. So I added it to my fav list. Of course, it goes without saying, that I'm anxious for them to meet in her time. Also, I bet he was attracted to her in the past is why he was not sealed and why his beast kidnapped her. He truly wanted her as his mate. Also, with his personality, after his mind was clear, he probably felt ashamed at what he had done and understood why she refused to mark him back. But deep down he had to be suffering from the pain of rejection. I hope you don't let too much time go by before they meet again, such as years.

I just finished reading chapters 1-3 and they are
quite marvelous. I love the dialouge and characters.
I only wish the chapters were longer. I kept wanting
to read more.... -pouts- Oh, well. Please continue
writing on "Fateful Encounters" and I'll definately
continue reading.

*smiles* Great story thus far. I'm definately curious as to what happened with Sesshoumaru, but as you said, he won't be appearing until much later. Guess I'll have to wait, lol. Also curious as to how Kagome will deal with a human/hanyou/demon child. As she's a powerful miko, it would be plausible for each of those, correct? Except of course, considering Sesshoumaru might be more powerful than her, which I would assume :P. So that leaves hanyou or full demon. In either case, please update soon, as I am enjoying it :D.

I do believe that this story will turn out to be wonderful. Hope that u update more often and keep up the great work.

Over all I liked what you've got.

It went a bit fast. Some advice: Would a rape victim talk constantly without sobing or whiping away tears. A way to show this is to break up the speach. "....." Kagome's shaking hands rubbed her wet face. "....." Try to put yourself in her position and how you'd react to the situation.

Its an interesting story, I hope you update again soon.
Good luck