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for Memoirs of a Blue Eyed Geisha

by sugar0o

schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh SWEET JESUS!!!!! YOU DID IT! YOU MADE ME CRY!!! MADE ME CRY SO HARDD':!! THATS GOTTA BE ONE OF THE MOST SADDEST, MOST BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN, ROMANTICALLY, HEART-STOPPING STORY I HAVE EVER READ! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! MAKES ME BELIEVE OF LOVE. I LOVE I AND I LOVE YOU! YOU MAKE THE MOST GREATEST FICS I HAVE EVER READ IN ALL MY LIVE! MADE ME CRY LIKE TITANIC DID BUT YOU MADE ME CRY HARDER!! LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE IT SO MUCH:DDDDDDDDD
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story it was touching and reminded me of the movie perfectly i pictured the parts and shed a tear at the end
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was fantastic. I cried. Beautifully written, and I am not being overly kind I promise. You have a way with words which is clearly shown by this story. I loved the way that the story was bittersweet, a sense of triumph as well as a sense of sorrow. I also love the Romeo/Juliet ending. It was just close enough to Memoirs of a Geisha to be reminiscent, but held its own life. Wonderfully done. Bravo. I hope to be seeing more of your writings in the future.

As for a different title, the only difference that would make is to be more eye catching. The obvious reference is what drew me in to read it in the first place, however.
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, Sugar. You made me bawl like a baby. It was so touching and sad and beautiful. I can't explain it. You writing was great, and I see a lot of improvement from past stories. God, I'm sorry, I'd write more but I can barely see the damned screen and my sister is looking at me like I'm an idiot for crying at my computer screen. Your Memoirs of a Blue Eyed Geisha is one hell of a story, Sugar, and I hope to see more like it... except ones that don't make a military brat cry. Thanks for the beautiful read.

~Draco

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