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LOVE THIS STORY SO FREAKIN MUCH!!! It gets better and better every chapter!!!! I love how you had Rin just call out Sesshomaru's name! Priceless!! And now that Sango's a succubus??? HAWTNESS IS ENSURED!!!! And Kagome strutting around in the new clothes she got for InuYasha? Just. Plain. Awesome! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!!!!!

Love the last cha[ter can't wait for the next one hope I or anyother readers have to wait ton long for the best story in the world right now. your doing a grate job at writing this story so dont take a year to come out with another chapter or I might just die lol. Thinks for writing a really good story for everyone to read.

oh my now what is inu gonna do to kagome when he finds out she maxed out the card i cant wait update soon

Wow I love your story soooooooooo much it is so adictive. I check the web everyday just to see if you update or added to the story. The relationships you have created is so dynamic and the plot is very original and pleasing to read. You have a real talent for characterization. I can not wait to read the next chapters and hope you continue this story in the future.

Much Luv
That English Girl**

hey man love the story just read the whole think in a few hr i love your reading style and the character. hope you update soon b/c this is my new fav story. keep up the good work im going to go read your other storys now :D.

damn this is getting really good oh god please update soon i so cant wait fro the next chapter

Okay, so I just started reading this tonight and OMG lol. It's freakin' HIL-arious! I have to start out by listing my fav parts, lol. I nearly died when Miroku told Inu that there were moments in which his brain stopped working for him, and he was like "huh?? wha??" Yeah, I was dying, I kid you not. Dying. I thought it was hilarious when Kag first met Shippo as the big balloon and started unconsciously squeezing his cute cheeks and freaking out when he transformed like "surprise, te-he!" I was also laughing my ass off when Sesh saw Rin ON the bar and nearly died when you had her saying "I used to be a modelllll!"
There are quite a few grammatical errors that make me re-read some lines, but it's easy to catch back up. And I quite honestly don't really care as a reader; just thought IN CASE you didn't know, that they were indeed there. Oh and your transitions suck. Sorry lol. Even just a couple of spaces to separate would help. It's sometimes hard to follow when you're reading, for instance, about Miroku and Inu being dorks and taking a breather from their run and then the next line is Inu taking a shower. I hope you take that positively. I'm not trying to be rude, just honest.
It's still pretty well written and easy to follow with an awesomely hilarious plot! YOU are a genius, lol! I loved it when the girls were like "screw you and the horse you rode in on!" and went shopping to spend all their money. That made me laugh when they maxed out the cards and were like "oh darn, would ya look at that" lol, it was awesome. ANYways, enough with my rambling. I hope this helps your writers ego and lights a fire under your butt to write faster and get an update out ASAP! Take care!!
*~*Evility*~*

AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD!! I actually squealed OUT LOUD when I read this chapter!!! SOOO GOOD!!! OH MY GOD!!!! GO MIROKU!!! SESSHOMARU YOU GET IT ON!!!! InuYasha... GET A MOVE ON!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I SUPER love this story and it keeps getting better very time I read a new chapter. But sometimes how u just leave the chapter like that it makes me set at the end of my chair till the next chapter comes out and I really hope its soon because I need my fix lol. Ur doing a good job don't stop

LOVED the new chp 17 update! Way to go Miroku! I'm interested to see how Sango, being his mate now, will be affected by his life-sucking ability. Oooo, and Inuyasha is such a shithead, lol! I hope she gets him good! lol. Great lemony-limes, btw. I can't wait to see what happens next!