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for The Importance of Being Kept

by WhisperingMoon

person leewrites
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great story so far. are u gonna give Sessh's bodyguards somebody to take care of?
person Anon
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, have to ask... Did Inuyasha choose the floor instead of the bed because they were wet, or because he didn't think the bed would survive their mating? ;)

Wow, there's so much juicy content you worked into this chapter. I love the interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha where you showcase their intense intimate physical and emotional reactions to one another that just take over their whole beings. Inuyasha definitely emerged as a fantastic lover, beyond just his care in preparing Kagome for the mating, but most especially in his ability to reassure Kagome with the love he feels for her throughout her insecurities and pain. Though Kagome might be upset thinking Inuyasha planned everything from the get-go, to me it seemed like Inuyasha just got caught up after a certain point, so hopefully she can come to terms with it sooner than later. Was their mating a normal one, or was that bright, white light something extra special?

As for Sango & Miroku, I am feeling an overwhelming sense of invasion of privacy. I don't think even if Inuyasha gets over it quickly, that Kagome would appreciate her first time/mating being invaded upon from behind LOCKED doors. I mean, even if they felt drawn to the sexual energy, does that mean they won't be able to help themselves to show up whenever another couple is mating near them? I don't think they would survive Sesshomaru if they turn up when he and Rin finally mate.
person lady_lodis
schedule July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i think this is great and couldnt stop reading cant with for the rest
schedule July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, update soon please!!! :)
person Mandy
schedule July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This fic is awesome! Please keep updating, I hope you do so soon! I can't think of much to say other than that...it's that great a story in my opinion.
person Sarah
schedule July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I love how you update fast and it isnt a measly 800 word chapter every time and the story is only getting better. bravo
person inugirl018
schedule July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well first think you for doing two chapters at once and they where both grate loving the new drama going on and its starting to get hot with inuyasha and kagome can't till the next chapter
schedule July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OOOOOOOH!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay I am DYING for the next chapter!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Now we're getting somewhere more intimate... steamy. Please keep it coming - no pun intended, well maybe. ;)
person Randi
schedule July 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when you were going to bring Kikyo back into this story. FYI- when I'm bored I read this story over and over again, please update soon