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for The Importance of Being Kept

by WhisperingMoon

person Jenns
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Freaking awesome about the sequel eeeeeeeeeeh! And I like the Whole morning after thing the possesiveness is priceless
person Anon
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious... is the only thing Kagome senses from Inuyasha his lust? Is it because it is so overwhelming? I ask because I was wondering how she would react when she senses Inuyasha's unparalleled/unconditional love for her, his devotion to her, his concern and worry for her wellbeing. Is she or Inuyasha blocking those thoughts/feelings? I guess she is just too shocked to make those connections yet. Once she does, will she accept and cherish them, or will she be even more frightened? In either case, they are both going to have to do what every other couple has to do… make compromises to satisfy the one they love, especially since that cannot change their situation short of death.

As for her hair, just what kind of look is it? Is it like equal streaks of black and white, or is it more punk-like with black and highlights of white?

I definitely can’t wait to see where you take us next. Also, happy to know that there is a sequel coming. It would have been disappointing if it ended so soon.
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
SEQUEL!!!!!!!! KYAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE *has hungry look in eyes* mooooore!!! I LOOOOOOOVE this story!! Rim go away let inuYasha and Kagome have more steamy sex!!! >< but........... A sweet chapter I loved it!!! UPDATE SOON!!!! or else *falls dramatically over couch* I'll die not knowing what's going to happen next!!! Do you want my *sighs dramatically* DEATH on your hands?? Update SOOON PLEEEEASE!!!
person inugirl_018
schedule August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have fell in love with this story so much and I think the last three chapters have been the best so far. I can't wait till the next chapter comes out because I want to see what happens now after kagome and inuyasha are mated. Don't make we wait to long for the next chapter. Your doing a grate job
schedule August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!!!! YAY YAY YAY YAY!!!! OHH GOOD CHAPTER!!! VERY WELL WRITTEN!!! update SOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!
person QtNico
schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow the mating scene was intense. 2 couples down 1 more to go.
person lady_lodis
schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg im gonna die waiting for the next chapter
person Mandy
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was awesome! So sweet...but steamy at the same time! Update again soon, kay? I love this story! :D
person Dimepieceleo
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
DAMN THAT WAS GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! I read it twice and then took a shower, I think I will never need a prop again. I AM SO SAVING THIS TO MY HARD DRIVE. YOU HAVE REACHED THE TITLE OF GREATNESS. I have recommend this story and these 2 chapters to all my reading friends.
THANK YOU
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bad, Inuyasha, BAD! Now go to my room! Lol.

Wow, that was uber hott! Chp 27 rocked! You weren't kidding
about that lemony-lime! I thought maybe you might have tricked
us with the first round, but you blew my mind n singed my
eyebrows with the second one!

I can't believe Mir/San went into Inuyasha's room! I mean really,
are they trying to get themselves killed, lol!? I wonder how Kags
will change. Should be interesting! I'm looking forward to your
next chappy!

Did I mention yet how much I LOVE this story? Well, I do.
I lubs it!