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for The Importance of Being Kept

by WhisperingMoon

person AndreaSky
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That's all I can say, keep on writing.
person inugirl018
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fing love it and the mom who would have though she was the evil, and rin god im glad that she is alive. But one chap left im going to die
person lauren
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow this keeps getting better
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PWND INU-BITCH!!!!! YOU GOT WHAT WAS COMING TO YA!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! RINS ALINE RINS ALIVE RINS ALIIIIVE!!!!! *does happy dance* I'm so happy!!!!! And daaaaaaamn Rin she's a little hottie Now, isnt she? AND NOW ALL THE ROOMIES ARE YOUKAI!!! hehe I vote for a Youkai Slumber Part!!!!
person lauren
schedule August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loving it continue
schedule August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO!!!!!! RIN!!! WAKE UP WAKE UP WAKE UP!!!! Btw: Kagome is sexy as hell. RIN WAKE UP!!!
person inugirl100
schedule August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg rin! I want to know who did this to her they need the butt kicked good. And I hope the mating worked I can't wait till the next chapter this story just keeps on getting better and better
schedule August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chp 29! I loved how Rin was ogling Inu and he was cocky enough to ask, "Like what ya see??" That was great! I thought it was HI-larious when Inu mentally checked to see where Kags was... skipping down the stairs innocently, "laaa lala laaaa!" and then the quick "oh shit" and running upstairs. That was awesome lol!

I totally forgot about Sesh's mom being pissed. That was so CRUEL to end the chappy like that! All I could think about was "Well, everyone DID just tell the world what his weakness was", lol.

As usual, it was well written and thought out. What's the sequel going to be about? Is it going to be an epilogue or will it be something else entirely? Great job and I look forward to your next installment.
person inugirl100
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG this chapter is crazy good and what is going to happen to Rin? Did the crazy mom have something to do with the darts can't wait I mean I really can't wait till the next chapter its really starting to heat up lol.
person Jenns
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
U can't do that to me omg what's gonna happen how could u just leave us with a cliffhanger really omg omg
omg I'm super excited to see what happens next and I LOVE this story

jenns