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September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is AMAZING! I never ever read InuxKag fanfic but I couldn't resist
This one after I read the summary. Your writing style is amazing and so is your story plot.
Keep up the good work.
HWIGHTING AUTHOR!
This one after I read the summary. Your writing style is amazing and so is your story plot.
Keep up the good work.
HWIGHTING AUTHOR!
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July 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story... really liked it... nice happy ending... good job... great work!
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March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this whole story! Your take on youkai and "normal life" was so clever, and more importantly, you wrote a story I literally could not put down. Great job! *runs off to read your other stuff*
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December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it I will certainly read the equal you have me adicted..
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October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I actually really enjoyed this. You're right, it did feel slightly rushed (I'm still boggled that it took a week for Kagome and Inuyasha to go from acquaintances-via-Kikyou to life mates!) and there were a few plotholes left hanging (what happened to Kikyou? will Kouga get closure? thank God you have a sequel!! :D) but I still enjoyed this! It's refreshing to read a story with actual plot in it, and not just lemon after lemon after lemon. Though I have to admit, your lemons are still quite welcome!
So yes, while the InuKag felt very rushed to me, I still absolutely loved how you handled the other relationships. I like the spin you have on Sango and Miroku. Most people have them as a slap-slap-kiss thing, but you put a bit of depth into their dynamic in this. Plus, being an incubus really works for him, I was surprised! Also a little disappointed that his dreaded wind tunnel didn't get to make an appearance. Hopefully he gets to see more action in your sequel? :)
Sesshoumaru and Rin, however. Their mating scene really did it for me. I think it was because they had the most apparent (and most heartwarming) development. The first SessRin scene - with her playing the piano while he was drinking wine? - if you compare that to how he was while taking her for the first time? It's so different! I was really really impressed. Reduced to a puddle of helpless goo at his admission to himself that loving Rin is a humbling experience. And then the raw desperation while he took her! And his regret that he their first lovemaking had to come around because she was *dying*. And then he asks her to forgive him just as he penetrates. Tears were shed. Oh Sesshoumaru, to admit that you must be forgiven at all. That's just. Oh. My heart. :'(
BUT. My favorites about this fic have to be Galieo and Jinko, oh my god. Most awesome original characters ever. I want my own Jinko. Best lines of the story go to him. Also the award for Most Badass. (Coolest Character to be Cool award goes to Galieo!) You *must* include them in the sequel. You must. Jinko needs to flirt with/harass more ladies. Or get it on with Kagura.
Congratulations! You've gained +1 stalker for your work. Great job on this one, and looking forward to more from you in the future! :)
So yes, while the InuKag felt very rushed to me, I still absolutely loved how you handled the other relationships. I like the spin you have on Sango and Miroku. Most people have them as a slap-slap-kiss thing, but you put a bit of depth into their dynamic in this. Plus, being an incubus really works for him, I was surprised! Also a little disappointed that his dreaded wind tunnel didn't get to make an appearance. Hopefully he gets to see more action in your sequel? :)
Sesshoumaru and Rin, however. Their mating scene really did it for me. I think it was because they had the most apparent (and most heartwarming) development. The first SessRin scene - with her playing the piano while he was drinking wine? - if you compare that to how he was while taking her for the first time? It's so different! I was really really impressed. Reduced to a puddle of helpless goo at his admission to himself that loving Rin is a humbling experience. And then the raw desperation while he took her! And his regret that he their first lovemaking had to come around because she was *dying*. And then he asks her to forgive him just as he penetrates. Tears were shed. Oh Sesshoumaru, to admit that you must be forgiven at all. That's just. Oh. My heart. :'(
BUT. My favorites about this fic have to be Galieo and Jinko, oh my god. Most awesome original characters ever. I want my own Jinko. Best lines of the story go to him. Also the award for Most Badass. (Coolest Character to be Cool award goes to Galieo!) You *must* include them in the sequel. You must. Jinko needs to flirt with/harass more ladies. Or get it on with Kagura.
Congratulations! You've gained +1 stalker for your work. Great job on this one, and looking forward to more from you in the future! :)
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September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to thank you for writing such an amazingly funny and absolte wonderful story and I cant wait to read the next one....Sorry I cant pick out one thing to comment on individually because I loved all of it so much....
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August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love this story very much I am sad to see it end, but im glad to see you are doing a sequel and tha makes me over joyed. I can't wait to read your new story and see how kagome and inuyasha and everyone else grows. Hope it doesnt take to long I would had to see you fall off the road for a long time then come out of the bule it would kill me lol.
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August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chap 32, Nailed it! Awesome! I loved how the bros made up and immediately started fighting, that was HI-larious. I also loved the girls conversation at the end. When Kagome was talking about icing the cake when Inu checked up on her, I was almost in tears! And then Sango's saucy self, "You know it!" That was great. I loved how comfortable they were talking to each other. And the ending line was a totally awesome closer! I'm sure my neighbors heard me squeal, "AWWWWWW!" from many buildings away.
It makes me greatly look forward to your sequel! I'm so glad you're continuing this line of story! It really does have much more potential. Which says a lot since it's SO FREAKIN' AMAZING!!! Lol.
It makes me greatly look forward to your sequel! I'm so glad you're continuing this line of story! It really does have much more potential. Which says a lot since it's SO FREAKIN' AMAZING!!! Lol.
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August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very nicely done i cant wait for the sequel. this is one of the best stories i have read.
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August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE (love x 10000000000000000000000) THE ENDING!!!!!!!! I NEED to know what the next story is going to be called so I can ANXIOUSLY read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The mailing list you used for The Importance of Being Kept, will you use the same for the sequel story???????????????????????????????????